Section  Ⅲ   Writing

Part A

51. Directions:

Restrictions  on  the  use  of  plastic  bags  have  not  been  so  successful  in  some  regions.  

"White pollution "is still going on. Write a letter to the editor(s) of your local newspaper to

give your opinions briefly and make two or three suggestions

You should write about 100 words. Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use "Li Ming" 

instead. You do not need to write the address.

题目要求写一封建议信，大意是某些地区禁止塑料袋使用并不是很成功，白色污染仍然在继续，就此给当地报纸的编辑写一封信，表明自己对此的看法并提出 2～3 

条改进的建议。该信函可以通过三段展开。在第一段中，直接点明主题，开门见山地说出写信意图，可以笼统地提出当前“白色污染”的现状及危害。第二段则要发挥想象力，从 2～3 

个方面点出怎样杜绝塑料袋的使用，减少“白色污染”。在写第二段时，一定要打开思路，可写的建议多种多样，如：笼统地想政府需要制订法律，人民群众需要提高意识。具体地可写一次性塑料袋应该严禁使用，提高塑料袋使

用价格，可以有一些替代使用的产品，比如纸制、布制的袋子提供给顾客使用。最后一段提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复。在写该段时，完全可套用通用的经典句型来结束。

二、参考范文

Dear editor(s),

I am writing this letter to draw your attention on “White Pollution”. Our country has officially 

enacted the law of plastic bag restriction, but it is observed in vain in several places, thus 

resulting in the continuing of “White Pollution”.

To address this problem, I would like to make some conducive recommendations. On the one hand, the 

authorities should set uprules and regulations to control the productivity and circulation of the 

plastic bags. On the other hand, people should realize the significance of protecting our 

environment and not use too many plastic bags.

     I sincerely hope you will find these proposals useful. Your prompt attention to my 

recommendations will be highly appreciated.

Sincerely Yours, Li Ming

在看到这一作文题目时，仔细审题很关键。考生一看画，映入眼帘的是张大网，网被分成许多格子，每个格子里有一个人，坐在电脑前，下面标着一行汉字——网络的“远与近”。这行汉字提示该作文的主题是“网络拉近了人们

之间的距离，还是拉远了人们之间的距离”。由于图中最突出的是格子，所以文章除了要写网络可以缩短人们之间的距离，也要突出网络给人们造成的隔阂以及网络疏远了人们的关系、减少了人与人之间面对面的交往。有的考生

误把图画描述成大家在群聊，又或只是从正面泛泛地谈了网络的好处，没有谈网络的害处；再或者从网络上的不良内容来分析网络的危害；更有甚者脱离了网络谈交流，这些都属于没有准确抓住漫画揭示的主题。

这篇文章可遵循三段论，第一段描写图画，说明很多人在被网络分割的格子里上网。第二段点题，讨论图画的意义，可以采用固定的套路一分为二地分析网络的距离是拉近了，但是现实的距离拉远了；第三段谈自己对此的观点。

文章按照这一思路来写，既切题又感觉有话可说。

三、参考范文

As is unfolded in the picture above, we can see that many people, old and young, men and women, 

sitting in front of a computer and surfing online in a gigantic web that is separated as many small 

cubicles. The caption in the drawing reads: “the internet: near or far ”.

The purpose of the drawing is to show us that the internet as a communication tool has both its 

advantages and disadvantages. On the one hand, many people hold a view that internet makes us close 

than ever before. With the development of science and technology, computers and internet are 

playing an increasingly important role in our daily lives. We can achieve an immediate 

communication via E-mail, QQ, MSN or ICQ. On the other hand, others argue that the internet weakens 

relationship among people. It can be easily spotted that some people may chat with total strangers 

online for hours, but may refuse to talk to their families or friends face to face for even a 

minute.

From what has been mentioned above, we may reasonably arrive at the conclusion that internet may 

draw us inches near, but could also set us oceans apart. Therefore, it is necessary for us to use 

internet in a reasonable way and take prompt initiatives to eliminate the negative effects 

concerned. Only in this way can we take advantage of internet and live in a more harmonious 

society.