评讲2007年考研试题写作部分。

51. Directions

Write a letter to your university library, making suggestions for improving its service.

You should write about 100 words on ANSWER SHEET 2.

Do not sign your own name at the end of the letter. Use “Li Ming” instead.

Do not write the address. (10 points)

Part B

52. Directions:

Write an essay of 160-200 words based on the following drawing. In your essay, you should

1) describe the drawing briefly,

2) explain its intended meaning, and then

3) support your view with an example/examples.

You should write neatly on ANSWER SHEET 2. (20 points)

三、写作技巧

写作“三步走”：

自我介绍、说明目的—>委婉地提出建议及改进措施，或提出忠告—>礼貌地总结或期盼回复。

提示：

提建议，语言一定要委婉、礼貌，顾及他人感情。在提出缺点之前，最好先肯定其优点。

建议信的行文结构及有用的表达：

第一段，介绍自己，说明写信目的。

I am…

I am sincere to give some suggestions concerning…

I am writing to advice you of improving the quality of your service in the library.

I’d like to give you some suggestions about/ in concern with your service in library.

第二段，委婉提出具体的建议。

I would like to express my sincere gratitude to you for your…, but it would be better if you could do something more in consideration of…

In my opinion, our library should do its best to…

I suggest that…

May I suggest that…?

In order to…, will you please…?

If you could…, the readers will…

What I intend to suggest is that whether you can…

第三段，表达希望和谢意。

Thank you for your attention for this matter.

I hope these suggestions will be useful for you.

Please let me know if I can help you further.

Many thanks for considering my suggestions.

I hope you will give these suggestions your full consideration.

I will highly appreciate your consideration of my proposals.

Part B

一、审题谋篇

07年考查的是图画作文，图片展示的是点球射门时，射门者和守门员头脑中想象内容的对比：射门者把守门员想象得很高大，几乎挡住了球门的全部；而在守门员的想象中，球门很大，自己却很小。此次作文主题比较宽泛，可以是关于自信，乐观，不同的人看问题的角度不同，不同的人有不同的态度，挑战，都不算跑题。

根据题目要求，文章分三段来布局。第一段，简要地描述漫画的内容，首先点明是一场足球赛，然后描述守门员(goalkeeper, goalie)和球员(player, kicker, attacker)的细节，射门球员在关键时刻把守门员想象得过于高大，感觉自己很难把球射中；而守门员把自己想象得太渺小，似乎自己守门成功无望。一些有关足球的名词也可能用到，例如：足球场(field, pitch)，球门(goal)，射门(shoot)，守门(defend the goal)。其它的表达有：minimize oneself(把自己看小)，magnify(放大)，a giant covering the net completely(把网完全挡住的巨人)等。

第二段，阐明该漫画的寓意，指出在面对挑战和困难时，人们总会不自觉地低估自己的能力，缺乏自信。然后指出自信乐观态度的重要性。可以从足球赛引申到我们的生活，生活中面临各种各样的挑战和困难，如生活节奏加快、竞争加剧、考试残酷而就业艰难，都需要我们树立强大的自信，乐观的态度。或者提出不同的人看问题的角度不同，提示要以客观的角度看问题。

第三段，用具体事例支持你的观点。只要贴题，能说明自己的观点，举正面和反面的例子都可以。