英语写作I

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目录

  • 1 第一讲 Introduction
    • 1.1 Purpose of the course
    • 1.2 What makes writing difficult?
    • 1.3 Why is writing important?
    • 1.4 Description/Narration
    • 1.5 Some basics of English writing
  • 2 第二讲 Describing a person
    • 2.1 Purpose of the unit
    • 2.2 In-Class Task
    • 2.3 Useful words and expressions – sample 1
    • 2.4 sample 1
    • 2.5 Useful words and expressions – sample 2
    • 2.6 sample 2
    • 2.7 Useful words and expressions – sample 3
    • 2.8 sample 3
    • 2.9 对比文章评讲
    • 2.10 Homework
  • 3 第四讲 Descrbing things
    • 3.1 作文任务评讲
    • 3.2 Learning objectives: --Describe the appearance, dimensions and texture of things --Describe things with feelings and emotions --Use specific words and sentence patterns to describe a thing in detail
    • 3.3 Samples
    • 3.4 sample 1
    • 3.5 tasks
    • 3.6 Sample 2
    • 3.7 Tasks
    • 3.8 Sample 3
    • 3.9 Tasks
    • 3.10 Major assignment
  • 4 第五讲 Describing place
    • 4.1 Learning objectives
    • 4.2 Samples
    • 4.3 sample1
    • 4.4 sample 2
    • 4.5 sample 3
    • 4.6 major assignment
    • 4.7 批改网作文
  • 5 Unit 4 describing senses
    • 5.1 Learning objectives:
    • 5.2 Samples
    • 5.3 Sample one
    • 5.4 Sample two
    • 5.5 Sample 3
    • 5.6 Assignments(批改网)
    • 5.7 作文评讲
  • 6 Unit 5 Describing Food
    • 6.1 Learning objectives:
    • 6.2 Samples and practice
    • 6.3 Sample 1
    • 6.4 Sample 2
    • 6.5 Sample 3
    • 6.6 作文讲评
    • 6.7 Major assignment
  • 7 Unit 6 describing the seasons and the weather
    • 7.1 Learning Objectives:
    • 7.2 Samples and practice
    • 7.3 Sample 1
    • 7.4 Sample 2
    • 7.5 Sample 3
    • 7.6 Assignments
    • 7.7 describing food作文评讲
  • 8 Describing landscape/scenery
    • 8.1 Purpose of the unit
    • 8.2 Warm-up activities
    • 8.3 Useful words and expressions – sample 1
    • 8.4 Useful words and expressions – sample 2
    • 8.5 Useful words and expressions – sample 3
    • 8.6 Homework(批改网)
    • 8.7 天气作文讲评
  • 9 Descrbing feelings and emotions
    • 9.1 sample 1
    • 9.2 sample 2
    • 9.3 sample 3
    • 9.4 Assignments
    • 9.5 风景描写讲评
  • 10 Developing  Paragraphs(II)
    • 10.1 Topic sentence
    • 10.2 Exercise
    • 10.3 Transition
    • 10.4 Developing by examples
    • 10.5 Development by Comparison and Contrast
    • 10.6 Development by Cause and Effect
    • 10.7 Development by Classification
    • 10.8 作文讲评
    • 10.9 作业(批改网)
  • 11 composing assays
    • 11.1 Introduction Paragraph
    • 11.2 Supporting Paragraphs
    • 11.3 Summary Paragraph
    • 11.4 II. Steps in Essay writing
    • 11.5 Style and Organization
    • 11.6 III. Types of outlines
    • 11.7 Assignments
    • 11.8 作文讲评与复习
  • 12 Prewriting and brainstorming
    • 12.1 1. 主要观点
    • 12.2 实战技巧
    • 12.3 练习:头脑风暴
    • 12.4 从读到写:
    • 12.5 写作练习:三选一
    • 12.6 作文讲评与复习
  • 13 Asking Questions: The Way to Critical Thinking
    • 13.1 Key Ideas:
    • 13.2 Practice
    • 13.3 From Reading to Writing: 讨论文后的问题
    • 13.4 Writing exercises
    • 13.5 作文讲评
  • 14 Writing with a clear ofcus
    • 14.1 Learning objectives:
    • 14.2 Key idea:
    • 14.3 Practice:
    • 14.4 From Reading to Writing:
    • 14.5 Writing exercise:
    • 14.6 作文讲解
Development by Comparison and Contrast

The same qualities that make people good house guests make them good hospital patients. Good house guests can expect a reasonable amount of service and effort on their behalf, and hospital patients can also. Guests have to adjust to what is for them a change, and certainly hospital patients must do the same. No one appreciates a complaining, unpleasant, unappreciative house guest, and the hospital staff is no exception. House guests who expect vast changes to be made for their benefit are not popular for long. Certainly nurses and other personnel with their routines feel the same way about patients in their care. Just as house guests must make adjustments to enjoy their visits, so patients must make adjustments to make their stays reasonably pleasant and satisfying under the circumstances.


1.Read the following sentences and indicate if they are sentences of COMPARISON or CONTRAST.


Though both are forms of humor, comedy is different from satire.


In 2050 the world will surely be different form what it is today.


Fashions in furniture change just as clothing fashions do.


Buying a car requires as much skill as selling one.


Badminton is as important a sport in Indonesia as football is in the United States.


There is more hard work in writing than in physical labor.


Ballet is a more exhausting art than gymnastics.


“Friendship”, like “love”, is often discussed but seldom understood.


2. Write statements of contrast to fit the following patterns(you may need a word or a phrase to complete the sentence).


TV and newspapers are____in many ways even though their aims may be the same.


Sound travels____through air than water.


Before 1880 many people died of smallpox; ____, the percentage of deaths from smallpox is small today.


Some children grow___ than other children because of nutritional differences.


____ to living on the farm, living in the city is an intense struggle to survive in a concrete wasteland.

Per capita earnings in Japan _____ those in South Korea.


3. Write statements of comparison to fit the following patterns(you may need a word or a phrase to complete the sentence).


The development of transportation and the development of communications____in many ways.


Anshan in the Northeast of China and Panzhihua in the Southwest are ____steel centers.


Despite centuries of change, human beings and their primitive ancestors have many traits____.


___ badminton ____table tennis requires a large playing area.


Although the last days of the Roman Empire may at first appear very different from those of the United States today, there are ominous____ .