八、卷面整洁

整洁美观的作文卷面能让评卷老师赏心悦目、舒畅阅读、正确评价，并赢得一定的印象分。能够让卷面整洁的方法有：1.书写端正、规范。作文卷面的每一个单词最好都要写得端正，不多笔、不少笔、不张冠李戴。因此平时要不断强化和优化写字训练，力争做到又好又快。2.打好腹稿，写好提纲，想好再写。在动笔写作前，心里应盘算怎样开头、过渡和结尾，如何组织语言文字等，可以在草稿纸上写下提纲。3.小心修改，不留痕迹。如果确实写错了，补救时一定要小心，不要弄破试卷，尽量不留痕迹。

下面以2014年12月（第一套）作文、2014年6月（第一套）作文和2013年12月（第一套）作文为例，简要讲解高分范文的写作思路。

【例1】[2014-12（1）]

Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay based on the picture below.You should start your essay with a brief description of the picture and then discuss whether technology is indispensable in education.You should give sound arguments to support your views and write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

"I'm going to need tech support."

高分范文

Whether Technology Is Indispensable in Education？

As is illustrated in the picture，a teacher asks a student to come to the blackboard and do a fundamental mathematical calculation while the student responds that he needs tech support to answer the question.Thus，it is not difficult to conclude that the student is too dependent on technology.Technology has been an indispensible part in education，exerting great influence on the way people receive education.

There are many reasons accounting for the wide application of technology in education.Firstly，technology innovates education modes—people currently have more access to a large amount of knowledge with efficiency and low costs. Furthermore，technology，especially high-tech gadgets， makes the dull learning process interesting.However， despite all the advantages technology brings，students should also be alert to the negative effects of technology as over-dependence will certainly result in lack of basic skills.

In my opinion，though technology is indispensible in education，without proper application，it would prove a great threat to people’s capability.

写作思路

科技是否在教育中不可或缺？

第一段：描述图画内容，指出图画寓意——这是一幅讽刺性图画，意在说明学生过度依赖科技，以至于丧失了基本计算能力。

As is illustrated in the pictureThus

第二段：指出科技广泛应用于教育中的原因，即优点，并分析其产生的影响，即缺点。

There are many reasons accounting for the wide application of technology in education FirstlyFurthermore

第三段：总结全文，重申自己的观点——科技在教育中必不可少，但应正确运用。

In my opinionit would prove a great threat to people’s capability.

【例2】[2014-6（1）]

Directions：For this part，you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay explaining why it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something.You can give examples to illustrate your point.You should write at least 150 words but no more than 200 words.

高分范文

Why Is It Unwise to Jump to Conclusions upon Seeing or Hearing Something？

It is true that“it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something”.For instance，when we hear someone says a singer is ill，it is not wise to jump to the conclusion that he/she is dead.When we see a movie star “jump into the water”，we immediately get a conclusion that he is drowned.It is unwise to do so since he/she probably is acting a scenario in a film.

There are several reasons why it is not proper that we haste to get a conclusion.For one thing，to jump to conclusions will make us in the wrong direction，taking an academic issue as an example.Things we see or hear are probably just indirect experience.For another，to haste to get a conclusion in life will lead us into an embarrassing or awkward condition as mentioned in the first paragraph.The third consequence of jumping to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something is that it will get us into trouble.Take spreading rumour for an example.

Therefore，it is necessary for us to enhance our ability to look into or track down what we see or hear before we make a conclusion.So，it’s high time that we paid more attention to what we see or hear.

写作思路

为什么对耳闻目睹之事妄下结论非明智之举？

第一段：根据题目中的关键词首先引出主题句——对耳闻目睹之事妄下结论是不智之举。其次通过举例子来解释主题句。

It is true that“it is unwise to jump to conclusions upon seeing or hearing something”.For instance，whenit is not wise to

第二段：承接上文，从三个方面分析对耳闻目睹之事妄下结论并非明智之举的原因，并举例论证。

There are several reasons why it is not proper that we haste to get a conclusion.For one thingFor anotherThe third consequence

第三段：总结全文，进一步阐述自己的观点，提出倡议。

Therefore，it is necessary for us to enhance our ability to look into or track down what we see and hear before we make a conclusion.

【例3】[2013-12（1）]

Directions：For this part you are allowed 30 minutes to write an essay commenting on the remark“The greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.”You can give examples to illustrate your point and then explain what you will do to make your life more meaningful.You should write at least150 words but no more than 200 words.

【高分范文】

How to Live a Meaningful Life

People always say that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.On the one hand，life is spent on something for the future，or for our offspring.For example，people work to build the Three Gorges Dam to make electricity.On the other hand，doing some little but meaningful things can also show the greatest use of life，such as offering a seat to a woman with a child.

I will do the following things to make my life meaningful.First，I will plant trees every year to contribute my effort to making the sky blue and the water clean.Second，I will learn my major biology well to cure some diseases，such as cancers.Third，as the saying goes，to do your own job is to contribute your effort to the society.

Only by spending our life on something that will outlast it can we contribute to our society.For one thing，we should learn from Lei Feng who did little but meaningful things.For another， we can do whatever we can to protect the environment.In a word，we can make our life meaningful by doing meaningful things.

【写作思路】

如何过有意义的人生

第一段：以“总─分”形式引出主题，解释谚语。 People always say that the greatest use of life is to spend it for something that will outlast it.On the one handOn the other hand

第二段：提出观点，指出自己将怎样做，并举例论证。

I will do the following things to make my life meaningful.FirstSecondThird

第三段：做出呼吁，提出建议，总结全文。

Only by spending our life on something that will outlast it can weFor one thing For anotherIn a word