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Whoever Helps Others Will Be Helped

①There are always times when people are unable to solve problems on their own and need others to help them out.In such cases，will you lend them a helping hand or just let them struggle alone？②From my perspective，it is sensible to be always ready to help others，for there goes a saying that“Help others and you will be helped when you are in need”.

③Whoever helps others will be helped.④Numerous examples can be listed to illustrate this point，but the following one will suffice.One of my friends Emma donated from time to time to a public fundraising platform named Qingsongchou to help its registered patients.Later her husband fell seriously ill and they couldn’t afford the expensive treatment.She had no other choice but to turn to the platform for help.Finally she received huge donations from it with which she paid for the treatment and saved her husband’s life.

⑤Just as the Nobel Peace Prize winner Albert Schweitzer said，“The purpose of human life is to serve，and to show compassion and the will to help others.”⑥Therefore，we should be always ready to offer help to others in this interdependent world.

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