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The Importance of Building Trust between Teachers and Students

①It can be said without exaggeration that teachers play a vital role in the life trajectory of students.②Likewise，trust between teachers and students contributes greatly to the academic success of students.③For one thing，trust between teachers and students enables students to feel secure in their learning atmosphere where they are motivated to be more engaged in class and to improve their academic achievement.③For another，mutual trust between teachers and students spurs teachers to make greater efforts to impart knowledge，which is in turn conducive to the education of the students.④Thus it can be safely said that teachers are like sculptors while students are like the soft clay，and it is trust between teachers and students that helps teachers to mold master pieces out of the students.

⑤In brief，trust between teachers and students can go a long way in fostering a safe and cozy learning atmosphere and providing impetus for teaching and learning，for which reason it is highly imperative to build trust between teachers and students.

范文点评

①从老师的作用着手，引出师生之间互信的重要性

②指出师生之间相互信任的重要性

③分分别从学生和老师的角度论证师生之间建立信任的重要性

④运用比喻论证法总结师生互信的重要性

⑤总结上文，重申师生互信的重要性