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The Importance of Building Trust between Employers and Employees

①It is universally acknowledged that any positive relationship is based on trust.And the relationship between employers and employees is no exception. ②Therefore，building trust between employers and employees is very important.

③On the one hand，if employers trust their employees，they would delegate tasks to them instead of telling them what to do while worrying excessively about minor details，which would definitely provide an incentive for employees to improve their skills and advance their professional development.③On the other hand，trust in employers would bring out the best in employees，reduce turnover of staff and improve employee satisfaction. However，without faith in the employers，morale will decrease while turnover will rise.④For instance，if an employee loses trust in his employer，he would lack the motivation to work hard and would consider changing jobs.

⑤In a nutshell，mutual trust between employers and employees weighs heavily in the workplace.⑥Both employers and employees are responsible for developing this positive relationship.

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①引出“信任”的话题

②引出本文的主题句

③分别从雇主和员工的角度论证雇主和员工之间建立信任的重要性

④举例论证员工信任雇主的重要性

⑤重申论点

⑥提出自己的看法