Comments: The whole letter takes the block style, so the complimentary close and the signature should be moved to the left side. The inside address and the return address have been misplaced. The date should be put below the return address. Since the writer greets the reader Dear sir, yours faithfully is a more appropriate complimentary close.

Rewritten Version for Reference:

106 Zhineng Avenue, Foreign Languages Department,

Suzhou Vocational University

June 21, 2016

No. 17 Chengji Road

Hushuguan Town Gaoxin District, Suzhou

IKEA Suzhou Store

Dear Sir,

I am writing to apply for the post of sales manager assistant of your company, which was advertised on your official website.

I graduated from Suzhou Vocational University this summer. My major is business

English. During my studies, I worked very hard in order to improve my language skills and communication skills. I took an active part in organizing various activities in the Student Union. In my summer and winter holidays, I did some part-time jobs to accumulate real work experience.

Working for ABC appeals to me because it is world famous furnishing company and it provides challenging and rewarding work environment. I believe my education background and work experience will make me a competitive candidate.

I am available for an interview at your convenience. Thank you for your time and consideration.

Yours faithfully,

Harry

Harry