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新编商务英语应用文写作
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Task 4

Comments: In the heading, William includes his address, phone number and e-mail address. William didn’t include his job objective, which is very important. The education part lists the degree, field of study and date of graduation. Relevant courses are also included. William takes several positions after graduation. But the experience should be listed in a chronological order. William didn’t include any activities or honors. But in his case, he doesn’t really need to, because his experience shows that he could handle positions related to his major.

Rewritten Version for Reference:

William Green

21 Banks Avenue

Elyria, OH 44035

440-234-1234

wg2345@hotmail.com

Job objective

Accounting position in financial department for medium-sized corporation that will utilize my education background and past work experience.

Education

B.S. in Accounting, Colorado University  May 2015

Relevant courses

Financial Accounting  Auditing  Effective business writing

Corporate Finance  Cost accounting  Federal Taxation

Work experience

Junior Accountant, Homa Inc., Akron, Ohio   September 2016-present

Handle monthly journal entries; analyze monthly expenses, help to generate monthly financial report

Junior Accountant, Flora Inc., Elyria, Ohio  October 2015-May 2016

Handle monthly journal entries, analyze sales representatives’ gross receipts, generate monthly financial report and give presentations.

Accounting Intern, M&A Advertising, Elyria, Ohio June-September 2015

Review and correct accounting entries, assist with financial analysis.

Skills

Proficient in Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint, and accounting softwares.