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新编商务英语应用文写作
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Task 4

Directions: Comment on the following résumé and try to improve it.

William Green

21 Banks Avenue

Elyria, OH 44035

440-234-1234

wg2345@hotmail.com

Education

B.S. in Accounting, Colorado University May 2015

Relevant courses

Financial Accounting   Auditing   Effective business writing

Corporate Finance    Cost accounting   Federal Taxation

Work experience

Accounting Intern, M&A Advertising, Elyria, Ohio June—September 2015

Review and correct accounting entries, assist with financial analysis.

Junior Accountant, Homa Inc., Akron, Ohio   September 2016—present

Handle monthly journal entries; analyze monthly expenses, help to generate monthly financial report

Junior Accountant, Flora Inc., Elyria, Ohio    October 2015—May 2016

Handle monthly journal entries, analyze sales representatives’ gross receipts, generate monthly financial report and give presentations.

Skills

Proficient in Microsoft Word, Excel, PowerPoint and accounting softwares.