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Subject: REMINDER!!!

John

Appreciate if you would consider and bear in mind that I am no longer responsible for dealing with petty cash. Some of your staffs keep bringing their vouchers to me, but this responsibility has been taken over by Martin in Accounts. He is the one who should be contacted for all petty cash matters.

Your cooperation is appreciated in making sure all your staffs know about this.

BRgs/Sally