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新编实用商务英语写作
1.10.3.3 3.Run-on Sentences乱加从句的冗句
3.Run-on Sentences乱加从句的冗句

Some sentences are not broken in proper units but contain a number of different thoughts jumbled into one sentence.Such a construction is called a run-on sentence.Often these thoughts are connected by conjunctions and run on for several lines.The reader must sort out the ideas and separate them.This is not only confusing,but a waste of time.

有些句子没有经过合理的分隔,而是由许多杂乱无章的思想凑合在一起,就构成了乱加从句的冗句。这样的句子通常都相当长,而且中间有连词连接。读者必须整理出作者的意思并将句意分隔开来。这样的冗句不仅使得句意含混不清,而且浪费读者的时间。

Compare:Will you please sign all three copies of the accident report that are enclosed and keep one copy for your files and return two copies to this office so that our agent can release funds for payment of the claim and send the signed copies of the form in the enclosed envelope by certified mail to this office.

Please sign each of the three copies of the enclosed accident report.Keep one copy for your files and return the other two copies by certified mail.When we receive the signed forms,our agent will send you a check in payment of the claim.