1. 框架：

引入——2 句…………点题——破题

论述——4 句…………主题句——分论点 123

结论——2/3 句………总结——（建议）——展望

2. 第一段：

描述图片 / 复述背景. From where I stand, it is a matter which deserves

extra attention.

 描述图片：

有人漫画： As is illustrated in the cartoon, sb. is doing sth + 修饰.

无人漫画： As is illustrated in the cartoon, there be sth in 某地.

柱状图/曲线：As is illustrated in the bar chart / curve, A increased from 数 1 to

数 2 from 时间 1 to 时间 2, while B …

饼状图/表格： As is illustrated in the pie chart / table, A accounted for x% of 总

数, B made up y%, and C, z%.

 复述背景

In this day and age, nothing has shaped our daily life / discussion more drastically

than did 主题 / the phenomenon (saying) that…

3. 对比观点第一段：

 对比观点

In this day and age, nothing has received more praise and abuse than does 主题

/ the phenomenon (saying) that…. With respect to such an issue, divergent views are

invariably voiced.

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Some claim that…, yet some others claim that…

There is no consensus of opinion among all the individuals as to whether主题is a

blessing or a curse / the role of 主题.

4. 第二段第一句

Several considerations, I believe, can be easily found to account for my point

among which I would like to name three most important ones as follows.

5. 第二段论点句

 个人——团体——社会

首先，as for individuals, those who... (for eg) are the most typical examples / cases

whose success / failure can be attributed to sth.

其次，in terms of families / companies / enterprises / schools / all the groups, their

survival and cohesion would be at risk because of / without 主题.

再次，from the social aspect, the harmony and prosperity of a community / country /

nation is mainly dependent upon 主题.

 经济/物质/科技——精神/心理/情绪——教育/文化/环保

首 先 ， many a person / a large majority of people, especially the ..., can be

economically / materially / physically / academically affected by / benefited

from 主题

其次， in terms of / regarding / with respect to mentality / psychology / emotions,

one will inevitably be blessed with / suffer from (the sense of)情感 if he...

再次， when it comes to the point of education / knowledge / culture / ecology,

there‘s no doubt that … boasts incomparable value/poses tremendous risk to people

concerned.

 综合论点

To begin with, numerous individuals, especially sb., are the most typical beneficiaries/ victims of 主题. The story / scandal of xx is a case in point. It was 主题 that

contributed to its / his / her success / failure / doom. It is by no means an isolated

instance, but one witnessed in all aspects of our life.

Furthermore, what cannot be neglected is that the prosperity of each and every 团体

also relies upon (handling) it. Thus they would cultivate greater competitiveness /

cohesion with a correct attitude toward it.

Last but not least, it has great value to / exerts tremendous impact on the harmonious

society / cultural diversity / ecological balance / nation and the next generation. That’s

why the phenomenon / topic is thought-provoking / a blessing / a curse and its

influence is far-reaching.

6. 第三段

We may safely draw from the previous discussion the conclusion that 主题 is

worthy of our attention in more ways than one. From my personal perspective, a

better understanding of it can help us toward a greater awareness of the world in

which we live.

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Joint efforts ought to be exerted by the 团体 and individuals to improve the

status quo. The former is responsible for setting up effective regulations / organizing

various activities to cultivate an ideal atmosphere, and the latter, on the other hand,

are supposed to attach due attention to 主题.