第四节　翻译评分标准

段落翻译题满分为15分，成绩分为六个档次：13—15分、10—12分、7—9分、4—6分、1—3分和0分。各档次的评分标准见下表：

表1

续表

在确定分数档之后，阅卷员需要通过对考生翻译中的语法、用词以及拼写错误进行量化，然后扣分，最终决定考生的翻译分数。而语法的量化考核也有一定的标准，具体见下表：

表2

续表

这两步之后，一份翻译的整体分数就确定了。总的来说，改革后的大学英语四六级翻译项目采取总体评分为主，量化考核为辅的评分方式：阅卷员首先通读整篇译文，根据“总体评分”的原则，确定其所属档位；其次详细阅读译文，寻找译文中的扣分点，在统计扣分点之后，根据“量化考核”的原则，确定译文最终的分数。以下将以2013年12月四级考试翻译中的“中餐篇”为例，给出各个分数档的参考译文以及阅卷员评语。

翻译原文：

许多人喜欢中餐。在中国，烹饪不仅被视为一种技能，而且也被视为一种艺术。精心准备的中餐既可口又好看。烹饪技艺和配料在中国各地的差别很大。但好的烹饪都有一个共同点，总是要考虑到颜色、味道、口感和营养（nutrition）。由于食物对健康至关重要，好的厨师总是努力在谷物、肉类和蔬菜之间取得平衡，所以中餐既美味又健康。

14分参考译文

Many people enjoy Chinese food.In China，cooking is not only viewed as a skill but also regarded as a form of art.A carefully-prepared Chinese dinner can be both tasty and good looking.While cooking skills and ingredients differ largely from place to place in China，fine cooking always has something in common，that is the consideration of color，flavor，taste and nutrition.Since food is vital to the health，a fine cook is always trying to achieve a balance between cereals，meat and vegetables.Therefore，the Chinese food is both delicious and healthy.（画线字体为有错误部分）

评语：

1.本译文用词贴切，行文流畅，注意到了句式的变化以及衔接词的使用。属于13—15分分数档的高分翻译。

2.出现了5处语法、用词的错误，所以最终确定为14分翻译。

11分参考译文

Many people like Chinese food.In China，cooking is regarded not only as a kind of skill but also as a kind of art.Chinese food，which is prepared carefully，is both delicious and good looking.Cooking skills and ingredients differ greatly from place to place in China.However，good cooking shares one thing in common：color，taste，feel and nutrition are always under consideration.Since food is of vital importance to health，good cooks are always trying to be balanced with grain，meat，and vegetables.As a result，Chinese food is delicious and healthy.（画线字体为有错误部分）

评语：

1.本译文表达了绝大部分原文的意思，文字通顺连贯，用到了复杂句式，显示出了较强的语言功底。属于10—12分分数档的翻译。

2.有一个严重错句，且出现了3处明显的语言错误，所以最终定为11分翻译。

8分参考译文

Many people love Chinese food.In China，cooking is not only regarded a kind of skill，but also art.Well-prepared Chinese dishes taste good besides good look.There is a big different in cooking skills and ingredients between different parts of China.But one thing which is common in good dishes is that they all consider about the color，the tasting and the nutrition.As food is so important to health，good cookers always try to make a balance between corn，meat and vegetables.As a result，Chinese dishes are delicious and healthy.（画线句为正确句）

评语：

1.译文基本表达原文意思，但用词欠缺，语言错误相当多，且其中很多属于重大语言错误，所以归为7—9分档。

2.画线句为正确句，总共4句，参照表2可知，本译文最终分数为8分。

5分参考译文

Many people like Chinese food.Cooking is not only a skill but also it is a kind of art.It is delicious and beautiful that Chinesemeals carefully prepared.It is differently in cooking and material beside in Chinese.But，good meals have a common point which color，teast and nutrition are though about.Then a good cooker is always trying their best to balance it from meat vegetables and so on.Therefore，Chinese meals are delicious and heathy.（画线句为正确句）

评语：

1.译文仅表达一部分原文意思。存在用词不准确，语言错误多等问题。所以定位为4—6分档译文。

2.参照表2，本译文中画线句为正确句，仅一句，所以最终定为5分译文。

2分参考译文

Many people like China food.In China，notonly a technolegemake food，and also an artist.Good food is eated fine and seem's fine.How make food and make the food need what is defferent in defferent place in China.Butmake good food just only think the food's colour teste，feelmake people and nutrition.Food is importand for health，so good people thatmake food is usemore power for better onmeat and vagitable，so Chinese food is taste good and more health.

评语：

本译文将原文内容基本表达，但是没有一个正确的句子，全部都存在严重语法错误。结合表一中的总体评分标准以及表二的语言错误量化标准，本译文为2分译文。

0分评分标准

未作答或者只有几个孤立的词，或与原文毫不相关的摘抄为0分。在此处需要特别指出的是，学生通过关键词“中餐”“好吃”等创作的作文，也不给分。

由评分标准可见，翻译考查的是学生运用英语进行书面表达的能力，不仅要求学生能运用正确的词汇准确表达原文、意义连贯，还要求学生的译文能语法结构正确、无重大语法错误、表达符合英语习惯。学生只要准备充分，掌握一定答题技巧是不难拿到高分的。