Ⅳ.范文赏析
范文1:
English Corner
English Corner is very useful to learn to communicate in English. Learning a foreign language requires four skills: reading,writing, listening and speaking. The English Corner is a wonderful place to practise both listening and speaking.
English Corner is also a good place to meet new friends. When I went to English Corner last Sunday, I came across a variety of people, who all had one thing in common; that is they wanted to communicate in English. So the atmosphere was relaxing.
English Corner enlarges our world. As we listen to foreigners talking about their countries and customs, we learn many things that we can't learn from books.
本文第一段是总领段,点明了English Corner在英语学习中的地位和作用。紧接着简单介绍了English Corner如何在我们英语学习中发挥作用。全篇文章结构紧凑,语句连贯,无华丽词汇之堆砌,但文章中心却表达的清晰而明确。
范文2:
English Dictionaries
Most English dictionaries will tell you a number of things about the language. There are three important things, spelling,pronunciation and meanings.
The first is the spelling of the words. If you are not sure about the spelling of a word, you can try to find the correct spelling in a dictionary. The words are always given in alphabetical order.
The second thing is pronunciation. Most dictionaries give the pronunciation of a word in a special kind of alphabet, which is called phonetic.
The third thing a dictionary will tell you is the meanings of words. Many words have more than one meaning, and a good dictionary will explain all of the word's meanings.
These are some of the important facts that you can learn from dictionaries.
本文抓住了英文字典的三个方面的主要内容进行阐述,采用总—分—总的结构方式组织材料,显得结构严谨。文章紧扣字典的主要特点进行说明,显得重点突出,对字典有一清晰的认识。
范文3:
The Spring Festival
The Spring Festival is the most important festival in China. It is on January 1st according to the Chinese lunar calendar. It's China's New Year's Day. So usually a month before the festival,people begin to buy food, clothes and decorations for houses.About a week before the festival, housewives are busy preparing the New Year's dinner. And they will do a lot of washing and cleaning in the house. People who are far away on business are hurrying to return home for the New Year's family reunion. On New Year's Eve, each family will gather together eating, talking and watching TV for almost the whole night. And there will be some interesting programmes on TV. The Spring Festival Gettogether Evening Party is especially loved by most Chinese. The children are the happiest of all because they can get presents from their parents or grandparents.
On Lunar New Year's Day, after getting up, people will eat Chinese dumplings. When they meet their neighbors or friends,they'll say: “Happy New Year!” to wish good luck and harvest.The New Year's celebrating activities will last about half a month.
本文介绍了中国传统节日——春节,文章按时间顺序详细介绍了人们庆祝春节期间的各种活动,全文内容清晰,结构严谨,逻辑严密。
范文4:
How to Use a Library
A library is a building for a collection of books, magazines,periodicals and newspapers. The books are kept on the shelves in the stack room whereas the magazines, journals, etc. are in the reading rooms. Modern libraries also have Xerox rooms and audiovisual rooms.
If you want to borrow books, you can go to the loan desk,look over the correct call numbers in the card catalog and ask the librarian to take them out for you. Or you are allowed to enter the stack room to find the books for yourself. You can look up the bound volume of index in the retrieval room for the articles relative to the subject on which you are going to write a thesis. If the library doesn't subscribe to the magazine which carries the article you want, you can borrow the magazine from the other libraries by means of interlibrary loan service.
Don't forget to show your library card or I. D. card to the librarian before you go into the reading room, where you can read magazines or newspapers. If you find a good article and want to keep it, you can have it duplicated in the Xerox room. Besides, if you want to watch films or slides, you can ask the projectionist to play the videotape for you in the audio-visual room, where you can also listen to language tapes and music tapes.
本文介绍了图书馆使用的细则,将借书规则表述得清晰全面。文章层次分明,脉络清晰,语言的精练准确、表述自然流畅。