Reading for writing
In this section, you’ll focus on the first three paragraphs of the text to learn how the author makes a contrast in security between the past and the present. You’ll be required to write a passage about some aspect of life that was common in the past but no longer exists at present.
The rubric (评分标准)includes thefollowing four aspects:
1. Content: 内容
2. Organization: 结构
3. Vocabulary: 词汇
4. Language use: 语言使用
There are two steps in peer feedback (同伴互评):
1. Detailed comments(主观评价);
2. Grading(客观评分)
主观评价说出你对同学作文的看法,尽量用英文表达。客观评分为整数分值,每项最高5分,最低1分,请算出总分。总分最高20分,最低4分。
| Content (5 points) | ·Writing effectively addresses the task; ·Writing presents a clear thesis; ·Writing maintains a formal style and an objective tone. |
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Organization (5 points) | ·Writing is well-organized and well-developed, using appropriate development patterns (e.g., definition, illustration, comparison/contrast, etc.) to support the thesis or to illustrate ideas; ·Writing displays coherence. Progression, consistency and unity; ·Textual elements are well-connected through explicit logical and/or linguistic transitions. |
| Vocabulary (5 points ) | ·Writing demonstrates adequate range of vocabulary; ·Writing displays effective word/idiom choice and usage; ·Meaning is clear. |
| Language use (5 points) | ·Few errors of agreement, tense, number, word order, articles, pronouns, prepositions; ·Spelling, punctuation, capitalization are accurate; ·Writing demonstrates effective complex constructions. |
For every aspect: 5.Excellent; 4. Good; 3. Average; 2. Poor; 1. Very poor

