目录

  • 1 Unit 1. American Farm Life
    • 1.1 Lead-in. Farm life in the United States and Britain.
    • 1.2 General Reading. Mr. Doherty Builds His Dream Llife
    • 1.3 Text Explanations and Supplementary Readings
    • 1.4 Reading for Writing. Structure of a Paragraph
    • 1.5 Text Analysis. Cultural Terms and Topic Sentence
    • 1.6 Exercises
  • 2 Unit 2. Civil-Rights Heroes
    • 2.1 Lead-in. Black Slaves in America
    • 2.2 General reading.The Freedom Givers
    • 2.3 Text Explanations and Supplementary Readings
    • 2.4 Reading for Writing. A Biographical Story
    • 2.5 Text analysis. Cutural terms, Text Organization and Direct Speech
    • 2.6 Exercises
  • 3 Unit 3. Security
    • 3.1 Lead-in. Security in the United States
    • 3.2 General Reading.The Land of the Lock
    • 3.3 Text Explanations and Supplementary Readings
    • 3.4 Reading for Writing. A Contrast Between the Past and the Present
    • 3.5 Text Analysis. Keywords, Contrast and Irony
    • 3.6 Exercises
  • 4 Unit 4.The Human Touch
    • 4.1 Lead-in: O. Henry and His Short Stories
    • 4.2 General reading. The Last Leaf
    • 4.3 Text Explanations and Supplementary Readings
    • 4.4 Reading for Writing.The Beginning of a story.
    • 4.5 Text Analysis: Structure of Short Story
    • 4.6 Exercises
  • 5 Unit 5. Making a Living
    • 5.1 Lead-in: Bill Porter as a Salesman
    • 5.2 General Reading. Life of a Salesman
    • 5.3 Text Explanations and Supplementary Readings
    • 5.4 Reading for Writing: Writing about the Life of a Person
    • 5.5 Text Analysis: Feature Story
    • 5.6 Exercises
  • 6 Unit 6.
    • 6.1 Lead-in
    • 6.2 General Reading. Electronic Waste
    • 6.3 Text Explanations and Supplementary Readings
    • 6.4 Reading for Writing
    • 6.5 Text Analysis
    • 6.6 Exercises
    • 6.7 Appendix-1
      • 6.7.1 country life
      • 6.7.2 living in C&C
      • 6.7.3 preserves
      • 6.7.4 Ivy league
      • 6.7.5 dogsled
      • 6.7.6 Insurance
      • 6.7.7 trade of slavers
      • 6.7.8 quaker
      • 6.7.9 religion
      • 6.7.10 modern day slavery
    • 6.8 Appendix-2
      • 6.8.1 crime and security
      • 6.8.2 land of the lock
      • 6.8.3 airport security
      • 6.8.4 rape whistles
      • 6.8.5 count the carriages in her funeral
      • 6.8.6 port wine
      • 6.8.7 wicked I was
    • 6.9 Appendix-3
      • 6.9.1 door-to-door salesman
      • 6.9.2 handicap
      • 6.9.3 ads
      • 6.9.4 rights
Reading for Writing. A Contrast Between the Past and the Present

Reading for writing

In this section, you’ll focus on the first three paragraphs of the text to learn how the author makes a contrast in security between the past and the present. You’ll be required to write a passage about some aspect of life that was common in the past but no longer exists at present.



The rubric (评分标准)includes thefollowing four aspects:

1. Content: 内容

2. Organization: 结构

3. Vocabulary: 词汇

4. Language use: 语言使用

 

There are two steps in peer feedback (同伴互评):

1. Detailed comments(主观评价);

2. Grading(客观评分)

主观评价说出你对同学作文的看法,尽量用英文表达。客观评分为整数分值,每项最高5分,最低1分,请算出总分。总分最高20分,最低4           

 

Content

 

(5 points)

 
 

·Writing effectively addresses the task;

 

·Writing presents a clear thesis;

 

·Writing maintains a formal style and an objective tone.

 
 

 

 

 

 

Organization

 

 (5 points)

 
 

·Writing is well-organized and well-developed, using appropriate  development patterns (e.g., definition, illustration, comparison/contrast,  etc.) to support the thesis or to illustrate ideas;

 

·Writing displays coherence. Progression, consistency and unity;

 

·Textual elements are well-connected through explicit logical and/or  linguistic transitions.

 
 

Vocabulary

 

(5 points )

 
 

·Writing demonstrates adequate range of vocabulary;

 

·Writing displays effective word/idiom choice and usage;

 

·Meaning is clear.

 
 

Language use

 

(5 points)

 
 

·Few errors of agreement, tense, number, word order, articles,  pronouns, prepositions;

 

·Spelling, punctuation, capitalization are accurate;

 

·Writing demonstrates effective complex constructions.

 

For every aspect: 5.Excellent;   4. Good;   3. Average;  2. Poor;   1. Very poor