Coherence 连贯性

For this part, you are allowed 30 minute to write a short essay on the topic “How Will Our Life Go on Without Internet?”. You should write at least 120 words following the outline given bellow:

How Will Our Life Go on Without Internet?

1. 网络提供给了人们丰富多彩和便捷的生活

2. 很多人开始感觉离开网络寸步难行

3. 你对网络依赖症的看法

Sample 

       As a primary source of information as well as an efficient means of communication, Internet offers people a colourful and convenient life. Just by clicking the mouse, we can enjoy a brilliant and easy life that could not be achieved ever before: shopping, making friends, contacting relatives, looking for jobs, downloading music and movies, conducting business deals, and freely airing our opinions.

       For its convenience, Internet has attracted people like magnets and some people even claim that it is indispensable. To them, life can’t go on without Internet. Every day millions of people spend hours on end surfing the Internet. They are obsessed with it so much that they forget many other important matters.

       As for me, I don’t approve of unrestrained Internet reliance. Although Internet is a gift of the technological revolution and a blessing of this information age, we should never let it control our life. Internet absolutely doesn’t mean the whole world to us. Instead, we should guard against its negative effects. To those Internet addicts, I would add: “Self-control can make or break your life. With proper use, Internet serves you; otherwise, it kills you.”