一、概述

正式的写作步骤：

1) describe the picture briefly;

2) analyze the topic;

3) give your solutions or comments.

Attention：每段开头最好写一个主题句，既可以防止离题，又符合英文写作的习惯。

第一段：引言/起始段，图画描述，3-4句

1．总体描述：人物/动物/事物＋动作＋环境 1句

寻找出图画的中心事物，确定中心事物的位置，从动作和状态两方面来描述画面中的中心事物；

2．挖掘细节词、串连成句： 1－2句；

3．过渡句：1句（可有可无）

第二段：主体段，意义阐释，大约5句

1．象征寓意：1句

2．具体论证：2-3句

1) 联系现实：图画作文创作原则（以小见大，个体化为群体）

2）原因分析（或影响分析，意义分析）

3）举例论证

4）反证

3．小结：概括论证，总结本段，1句

第三段：结论段，建议措施，4句

1. 结论句：1句

2. 针对双方提建议/ 展望未来：2句

3. 结束句：1句

1）倒装句：Only after we realize and endeavor with the issue can we shake off their negative influence of fast food on our health condition.

2）强调句：The number of books we read may not be an important indicator of personal ability, but it is how much we understand from the books that really counts.

3）虚拟语气：It is high time that we took all these measure to solve this severe problem in the shortest possible time.

描述图画的常用词

picture 广义的“图画”，多指相片、图像

drawing 指用线条或色彩绘成的图画

cartoon 指幽默或讽刺性漫画

描述图画的形容词

引发关注：vivid, attractive, noticeable, striking, impressive

有趣可笑：funny, amusing, ridiculous

引发思考：thoughtful, enlightening, revealing

益处好处：helpful, useful, beneficial

含义深刻：profound/far-reaching implications

（搭配副词:extremely, highly, particularly）

修饰动词的副词：

vividly, subtly, clearly/obviously/ apparently

寓意moral

The moral of thisstory is very simple.

The moral tagged to the picture is clear.

The implications of this direct investment are many.

二、描述段

可供参考的句型：完全套用

1.  The cartoon is so funny that whoever in front of it cannot help laughing.

2.  Though the picture seems to be funny, the drawer intends for deeper meanings than what is shown superficially.

可供参考的句型:半套用

概括性描述：

1.  As isvividly described in the cartoon above ______.

e.g. As is vividly depicted in the picture given above, a gentle father is talking heart-to-heart to his little cute daughter in their living room.

2.  What is clearly presented in the drawing above is that ______.

e.g. What isclearly illustrated in the drawing above is that a student holds the opinion that the basic math skill might be outdated by the time he's in the job market.

3. We can see from this picture that ______.

e.g. We can see from this picture that a teacher is teaching her pupils to deal with arithmetic questions.

4. The cartoon depicts a conversation between ______.

e.g. The cartoon depicts a conversation between a mom filled with anticipation and her daughter telling her some good news.

细节描述：

5.  What impresses me most is that ______.

e.g. What impressed me the most was the children's very strong desire to live and their positive attitude.

6.   What makes the drawing striking is that ______.

e.g. What makes the drawing striking is that computer even emerges in his dream when he’s sleeping at night.

4种描写句型

1．主体（+定从）+动作+客体（+定从）

e.g. Two men, dressed in traditional Chinese costumes, are watching the construction of ancient Great Wall, which is amazing achievement of teamwork.

2．地点+动作+主体（+定从）

e.g. In front of the blackboard stands a benign teacher who is posing a question to a little boy who seems quite puzzled.

3．There is/are主体（+定从）

e.g. In the picture, there is a student talking to his father with the words that “Why am I going to school if my phone already knows everything?”

4．非谓语动词做插入语，用分词做状语

e.g. The students followed the teacher andwent out. →Following the teacher, the students went out.

过渡句

1. Simple as the picture is, the implied meaning is as deep as ocean.

2. There is no doubt that its symbolic meaning subtly conveyed should be given deep consideration.

三、分析段

一、寓意阐述

1.The message conveyed by this cartoon is that the idea of “green” brand has gone too far and no longer carries the same sort of impact it once did.

2. Apparently, this cartoon can be naturally associated with the significance of doing small things.

3.The purpose of the picture is to remind us that due attention should be paid to the spelling issue when writing essays or research papers.

二、原因分析

物质方面：金钱；环境因素；健康因素；政策法规

精神方面：获得机会；获取知识，提升技能；兴趣；满足感；受到尊重；掌控命运；丰富人生经历；交际需要；沮丧；迷失自我

1.  A number of factors might lead to the phenomenon.

2.  There are quite a few possible reasons suggested here for this choice.

3.  The factors that contribute to this situation include personal interest, life experience and especially professional skills.

4.  We may blame their laziness, but the fundamental causes are lack of achievement motivation and guidance from parents.

5.  金钱

e.g. From a personal perspective, the joint venture generally offers a higher salary than the state-owned enterprise.

6.环境 

e.g. The joint venture always possesses amore cooperative meanwhile more competitive working atmosphere. 

7.知识与技能 

e.g. There are numerous reasons accounting for the importance of going to school, while the following might be the most critical ones. First and foremost, school education means not only book learning, but also some practical abilities, such as communication, cooperation, etc.

8. 知识

e.g. From a personal perspective, further education can equip me with more solid and profound knowledge for my future job.

9. 政策

e.g. The Chinese government has used several methods to control population growth.

10. 满足感

e.g. Small steps can be more motivating, because you see the results now instead of in decades.

Task 1: Write a composition to analyze why smoking is banned in public places with the pattern given above.

三、影响、意义分析

（一）正面影响、意义

1. play an indispensable role in combating Internet crime

2. be beneficial to your health, especially that of your brain

3. contribute to reducing cost and making great progress

4. bring about a far-reaching influence on one’s social status

5. lay a solid foundation for my future career

6. preserve the essence of the cultural heritage

7. enhance mutual understanding

8. improve the quality of our lives

9. promote economic growth

10. relieve you of the burden of earning a fortune

11. shorten the distance between different people/ areas/ countries

12. increase creativity and productivity 

（二）负面影响

1. exerta negative influence on people’s creation and practice

2. bring about an unfavorable consequence on overall prospect

3. adversely affect your interpersonal skills

4. hinder/interfere with personal growth

5. pose a tremendous threat to the food security

6. put an enormous pressure upon the teens to earn good grades

7. undermine their trust in their parents

8. be detrimental to long-range development of his character

Task 2: Write a paragraph to summarize the importance of physical exercises with the pattern given above.

Task 3: Write a paragraph to describe the effects of traffic jam with the pattern given above.

 四、举例论证

1.What's worse, Internet transaction is not secure enough. For example, the password of some people's bank accounts may be leaked out when they shop online.

2. A case in point is the long held belief that boys are better at mathematics than girls.

3. Numerous examples can be given, but this will be enough. One of my closest friends, Helen, started a net relationship with a man she knew as "PrinceCharming".

4. I can think of no better illustration than the following one. If Edison hadn't invented the light bulb, we would have lived a life as the blind in the night.

5. According to a recent survey, 29 percent of the customers admit to over spending on this during the holidays.

Task 4: Write a paragraph to list some examples about global warming with the pattern given above.

 五、反证

1. Obviously, if we don't control the problem, the chances are that aging population will lead us in danger.

2. No doubt, if we ignore their significance, itis very likely that many small online companies will be put indanger.

四、结论段

一、尾段开头句

1.  From what has been discussed above, we can draw the conclusion that students that would like to become self-employed in the future had better gain some years of working experience ina company before they found their own one.

2. In summary, whether it is positive or negative, one thing is certain: they are already changing the way we seeour world..

二、对策与建议

常见对策：个人努力，媒体宣传，制定政策

1. It is, therefore, necessary that efforts should be made to deal with the problem as early as possible. The youngsters should face it with confidence and fight against it with courage.

2. We might do more than identify the cause; it is important to take actions to prevent people from smoking in public.

3. As far as I’m concerned, my suggestions are as follows: to arouse public awareness of the problem is the first step toward the solution.

4. People had figured out many ways to solve this problem. The government should take the legislative initiatives to prevent the ill-practice from further speeding;

5. It is high time that strict measures were taken to stop the indulgence in online games.

Task 5: Write a paragraph to give some suggestions upon how to ease the college students’ employment pressure with the pattern given above.

 三、展望未来

1. Since there are so many advantages of international travel, not surprisingly, more tourists would choose overseas countries as their destinations.

2. Implementing these measures might be challenging initially, but the result will be worth the efforts.

3. Following these suggestions may not guarantee the success for our academy, but the effort might cause some reward.

4. We may have a long way to go before we hit our targets. But once we are on the way, the chance to reach it is greater.

Task 6: Write a paragraph to predict some solutions to energy shortage with the pattern given above.