课程门户-章节详情

朱晓冬

1 Furniture design
- 1.1 Reading and translating
- 1.2 NEW WORDS AND EXPRESSIONS
- 1.3 Check Your Understanding
- 1.4 Listening and Speaking
- 1.5 Teaching video
2 Furniture material and Furniture designers
- 2.1 Solid wood
- 2.2 Wood-based panel
- 2.3 Furniture designers
- 2.4 Furniture technology
3 Product design
- 3.1 Reading and translating
- 3.2 NEW WORDS AND EXPRESSIONS
- 3.3 Check Your Understanding
- 3.4 Listening and Speaking
4 Industrial Design
- 4.1 Reading and translating
- 4.2 New Words and Expressions
- 4.3 Check Your Understanding
- 4.4 Retailing and Speaking
5 Interior design
- 5.1 Reading and translating
- 5.2 New Words and Expressions
- 5.3 Check Your Understanding
- 5.4 Listening and Speaking
6 中英文文献检索
- 6.1 中文文献检索
- 6.2 英文文献检索
- 6.3 英文期刊简介
7 Unit 1 Fabrics
- 7.1 Listening &Speaking
- 7.2 Reading &Translating
- 7.3 Practical Writing
- 7.4 Meeting people for the first time
- 7.5 Meeting people again
- 7.6 Fabrics
- 7.7 fabrics
- 7.8 Sample order
- 7.9 measure points
- 7.10 accessories
- 7.11 business activities
- 7.12 words of business activities
8 Unit 2 Color
- 8.1 Listening &Speaking
- 8.2 Reading &Translating
- 8.3 Practical Writing
- 8.4 Showing customers around
- 8.5 Visiting the workshop
- 8.6 Colors
- 8.7 how to name colors
- 8.8 color coordination
- 8.9 Approval sample card
- 8.10 measure points
- 8.11 accessories
- 8.12 inquiry
9 Fashion Design
- 9.1 Listening &Speaking
- 9.2 Reading &Translating
- 9.3 Practical Writing
- 9.4 Having dinner
- 9.5 Making an inquiry
- 9.6 Price Negotiation
- 9.7 Principles of fashion design
- 9.8 Worksheet
- 9.9 accessories
- 9.10 designing labels
- 9.11 Offer
10 Styles
- 10.1 Listening & Speaking
- 10.2 Reading & Translating
- 10.3 Practical Writing
- 10.4 garment details design
- 10.5 style description--Cheongsam
- 10.6 style description--LBD
- 10.7 purchase order
11 Product Management
- 11.1 Listening & Speaking
- 11.2 Reading &Translating
- 11.3 Practical Writing
- 11.4 Complaints
12 Unit 6 Quality Control
- 12.1 Listening & Speaking
- 12.2 Reading &Translating
- 12.3 Practical Writing
13 Unit 7 Sales
- 13.1 Listening & Speaking
- 13.2 Reading &Translating
- 13.3 Practical Writing
14 Fashion
- 14.1 Listening & Speaking
- 14.2 Reading &Translating
- 14.3 Practical Writing
- 14.4 Fashion
- 14.5 Brands
- 14.6 luxury brands
- 14.7 famous brands（补充）
- 14.8 read them properly
15 写作和思维
- 15.1 直线和曲线——语篇的重心
- 15.2 形合和意合——语篇的衔接
- 15.3 什么是漂亮的写作——写作标准
- 15.4 小测 1
- 15.5 讨论：下面的邮件需要修改吗？
- 15.6 讨论：什么是流水句？
16 用词准确生动
- 16.1 用词是否准确
- 16.2 用词简洁有力吗
- 16.3 用词重复需避免
- 16.4 小测 2
17 有效的句子
- 17.1 句式如何多样化
- 17.2 句子的逻辑不清晰
- 17.3 句子结构越复杂得分越高吗
- 17.4 小测 3
18 段落及拓展方法
- 18.1 一定要有中心句或主题句吗
- 18.2 如何写开头段
- 18.3 小测 4
- 18.4 段落拓展方法
- 18.5 中心段落如何展开
- 18.6 结尾段怎样写
- 18.7 小测 7
- 18.8 对比法——如何展开对比论证
- 18.9 例证法——如何写出贴切的例子
- 18.10 小测 5
- 18.11 因果论证法——如何表达因果关系
- 18.12 问题解决法——如何提出问题及解决方案
- 18.13 小测 6
19 段落的修改
- 19.1 我的句子写对了吗
- 19.2 行文如何更流畅
- 19.3 如何进行段落修改
- 19.4 小测 8
20 期末测试
- 20.1 期末测试1（客观题部分）
- 20.2 期末测试 2（写作部分）

讨论：下面的邮件需要修改吗？

请大家讨论下面的邮件符合英语写作思维吗？你有哪些修改意见？

有个朋友年前想去新加坡旅行，准备住新加坡出名的金沙酒店。他开始浏览网页使用的是英文，后来发现支付方式支持支付宝，于是就换成中文。但是他发现一样的房间价格却差了26新币，大约130人民币。所以写封邮件准备问一下。以下为邮件的内容。

Dear Sir/Madam,

My friends and I am going to visit Singapore from 23th to 27th this month. Your hotel boasts the best service and unrivalled panoramic views, we'd like to get a taste of them. But we've found ourselves in an embarrassing situation when making reservation. Firstly we visited the website in English version, but it turned out that alipay was available here so we switched to Chinese version. Then we found that the same room has the same different price in English and Chinese pages, which we don't think it's reasonable.

Please help to explain the reason why the same room has different prices.

Attached the photo to show the difference in price for the same room.

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