【主题分类】写作:议论文
【结构梳理】
引出话题:随着经济和社会的发展,城市化比率越来越高。大城市生活给人们带来便利的同时,也面临诸多挑战。
具体论述:阐述大城市生活的具体挑战如上下班高峰时段的交通拥堵问题、大城市人口的持续增多导致拥挤和杂乱的生活、城市人口的聚集加剧优质医疗和教育资源的短缺。
总结观点:简单总结阐述的观点
【关键句型】
1. With+名词或名词性短语:这是很多考生喜欢使用的一个表达,用来引入话题。但在使用的时候一定要注意with后面接的是名词性的表达,如果遇到动词,一定要记得进行分词变位
2. The first challenge/problem is...the next challenge/problem is...another challenge/problem is...使用这些表达以此引出各种挑战
除此之外,以下表达也可以采用To start with..., next..., in addition..., what’s more...,lastly...首先、其次、再者、......最后
3. To sum up..., in one word..., to boil it down... 总而言之,总的来说
【参考范文】
The Challenges of Living in a Big City
With the development of economy and urbanization, the number of big cities is constantly increasing in China. While big cities are attracting more and more people, they also bring many challenges, such as traffic jam and pollution, just to name a few.
The first problem that really bothers me is the traffic congestion during rush hours. I hate waiting for buses and being late for school or work. The next problem is that the large population in big cities makes them so crowded that we can hardly find a peaceful place unless staying at home. Supermarkets are always crowded, so are cinemas and parks. Another consequence of the large population is that it intensifies the inadequacy of high-quality medical and educational resources, thus decreasing resident’s sense of happiness.
As a result, although I am frequently asked whether I like to live in a big city or not, my answer is always “no, definitely not.” What about you?