12. Research journal article-Acknowledgments and References
Give credit where credit is due. Check the format in the Instructions for/to Contributors/Authors and a recent issue for details. This is especially important for the References section. As for the Acknowledgments section, it is rather simple but sometimes grammatical problems arise. In 12.1 are some flawed examples from different Acknowledgment sections. Can you identify the problems and improve the sentences?
12.1 Exercise: Edit the following sentences from Acknowledgments sections. The first one has been done for you.
1. We thank to Ms. Yoshida and Ohta for technical assistance. |
We thank Ms. Yoshida and Ms. Ohta for their technical assistance. |
2. Present work was supported in part by New Energy and Industrial Technology Development Organization. |
3. I would like to express my deepest thanks to Dr. Y. Suzuki for guiding me to studies using X systems during graduate course at Z University. |
4. I also thank to many of my colleagues during my work. |
5. We are grateful to Dr. C. Smith for critical reading of the manuscript and to Drs. J. Yasuda and T. Kuno for many valuable discussions. |
6. This work is, in part, supported by Japan Health Science Foundation and Grant-in-Aid for Scientific Research on Priority Areas, Ministry of Education, Science and Culture, Japan. |
7. I would like to thank H. Kuwahara for useful suggestions. |
8. I am grateful to Peter Brown for providing of synthetic hormone. |

