高级英语写作

叶忠星

目录

  • 1 第一单元 雅思写作导论
    • 1.1 Part 1 什么算是好的雅思作文
      • 1.1.1 部分雅思资源推荐
      • 1.1.2 2019年雅思大作文真题合集
      • 1.1.3 2018年雅思写作大作文真题
    • 1.2 Part 2 雅思写作评分标准
      • 1.2.1 lexical resource
        • 1.2.1.1 词汇多样性ppt
          • 1.2.1.1.1 选择更正式的词汇ppt
        • 1.2.1.2 词汇多样性范文分析
      • 1.2.2 Grammatical range and accuracy
      • 1.2.3 Coherence and Cohesion
      • 1.2.4 Task response
    • 1.3 Part 3 雅思作文语言关
    • 1.4 Part 4 雅思作文思维关
    • 1.5 Part 5 破解题目1  批判思维
    • 1.6 part 6 破解题目2   三大层次
      • 1.6.1 破题  论据思考
    • 1.7 part 7写前计划
    • 1.8 part 8雅思task 2常见话题
  • 2 第二单元 句子篇
    • 2.1 英语句子基本结构及拓展
      • 2.1.1 并列句练习题
      • 2.1.2 复合句练习
    • 2.2 句子错误
    • 2.3 常见句子语法错误类型
    • 2.4 句子语法错误修改实例
    • 2.5 改错作业集锦
    • 2.6 小贴士 如何写复杂句
    • 2.7 句式多样性
  • 3 第三单元 词汇篇
    • 3.1 概述
    • 3.2 task 2常见话题必备词汇
    • 3.3 雅思作文用词技巧
      • 3.3.1 小贴士 写作100组意群词汇
      • 3.3.2 小贴士 600多个高分词
    • 3.4 学术词汇练习题
    • 3.5 词汇替换练习132题
    • 3.6 简洁才是美
    • 3.7 配套词汇练习 不含答案
  • 4 第四单元 必备句型及段落
    • 4.1 新东方英文写作佳句300例
    • 4.2 文章开头 视频讲解
      • 4.2.1 如何写文章开头ppt
    • 4.3 如何写中间段落 视频
    • 4.4 原因-结果
    • 4.5 比较-对照
    • 4.6 批评-驳斥
    • 4.7 推理-分析
    • 4.8 举例-事实
    • 4.9 深入阐述
    • 4.10 反面阐述
    • 4.11 文章结尾视频讲解
      • 4.11.1 如何写结尾ppt
    • 4.12 最重用句型 总结
  • 5 第五单元 教育类
    • 5.1 教育类写作命题规律+ppt
    • 5.2 教育话题常用搭配
    • 5.3 词族练习
    • 5.4 翻译练习 ideas
    • 5.5 关联词练习
  • 6 第六单元 科技类
    • 6.1 科技类写作命题规律+ppt
      • 6.1.1 贴士brainstorming
      • 6.1.2 Connecting agreeing ideas and contrasting ideas
      • 6.1.3 Advantages and disadvantages
      • 6.1.4 大作文选词填空
      • 6.1.5 中间段落补全
    • 6.2 词族练习
    • 6.3 翻译练习ideas 1
    • 6.4 翻译练习ideas 2
    • 6.5 万能思路
    • 6.6 关联词练习
  • 7 第七单元 旅游类
    • 7.1 ideas for tourism ppt
      • 7.1.1 model essay living and working in a foreign country
      • 7.1.2 ordering
    • 7.2 词族练习
    • 7.3 翻译练习ideas
    • 7.4 大作文练习
    • 7.5 顾家北配套2.2.19廉价航空  句子改写任务
  • 8 第八单元 媒介类
    • 8.1 相应 ppt
    • 8.2 匹配题
    • 8.3 大作文练习
    • 8.4 大作文练习2
    • 8.5 媒体类翻译练习ideas
    • 8.6 万能思路
    • 8.7 顾家北配套2.2.14 广告  句子改写任务
  • 9 第九单元 政府类
    • 9.1 ppt
    • 9.2 政府观点
    • 9.3 政府类翻译练习ideas
    • 9.4 大作文对比
    • 9.5 顾家北配套2.2.9句子改写
  • 10 第十单元 家庭类
    • 10.1 家庭类 ppt
      • 10.1.1 小贴士 高分词替换低分词大作文
    • 10.2 小贴士  段落功能匹配
    • 10.3 大作文练习
    • 10.4 家庭类观点翻译ideas
    • 10.5 万能思路
    • 10.6 顾家北配套2.2.1句子改写
  • 11 第十一单元 社会/犯罪类
    • 11.1 章节ppt
    • 11.2 犯罪类补充阅读练习
    • 11.3 犯罪类观点翻译ideas
    • 11.4 万能思路
  • 12 第十二单元 动物类
    • 12.1 章节ppt
    • 12.2 动物类观点翻译ideas
  • 13 第十三单元 环境类
    • 13.1 章节ppt
    • 13.2 大作文练习
    • 13.3 词族练习
    • 13.4 词汇练习
    • 13.5 必备词汇
    • 13.6 环境类观点翻译ideas
    • 13.7 万能思路
  • 14 第十四单元 工作/生活类
    • 14.1 章节ppt
    • 14.2 话题 在家办公的好处和坏处
      • 14.2.1 Key language for writing about work and careers
      • 14.2.2 小贴士 代词连接观点和防止重复
    • 14.3 大作文练习2 Food and diet
    • 14.4 大作文1练习
    • 14.5 补充视频 大人可以从小孩那里学到什么?
  • 15 第十五单元 文化语言类
    • 15.1 章节ppt
    • 15.2 文化类ppt
    • 15.3 补充视频
    • 15.4 语言类练习
  • 16 第十六单元 图表题
    • 16.1 图表必备语言
    • 16.2 雅思小作文ppt
    • 16.3 小作文练习
    • 16.4 图表作文练习
    • 16.5 提示1 prepositions
    • 16.6 提示2 adding an explanation
    • 16.7 Describing numbers, percentages & fractions
    • 16.8 tip3
    • 16.9 练习2 图表
  • 17 第十七单元 地图题
    • 17.1 地图ppt
    • 17.2 地图练习1
    • 17.3 地图练习2
    • 17.4 地图练习3
  • 18 第十八单元 流程图
提示1 prepositions

Using the right prepositions

It is important to use the right preposition when you are reporting the features and describing the numbers, prepositions like to, by, with and at when describing numbers and figures.

Here are some examples to give you a basic idea of the differences:

1. Use to when describing what happened to the number:

In 2008, the rate of unemployment rose to 10%.

2. Use by when describing the amount of change between two numbers:

In 2009, the rate of unemployment fell by 2% (from 10% to 8%).

3. Use with to give the idea of 'having' the number:

He won the election with 52% of the vote.

4. Use at to add the number on the end of a sentence:

Unemployment reached its highest level in 2008, at 10%.

Exercise: Complete the sentences choosing the right preposition from the list below.

for at on to in by from between    of up down with and during

1. ……… 1990 ……… 2000, there was a drop ……… 15%.

2. GM car sales peaked ……… 2,000 in 1999.

3. The chart shows a decline ……… 35% ……… the bird population.

4. There has been a significant increase ……… the number of people aged over eighty.

5. There have been dramatic cuts ……… the level of spending on the elderly, reaching a low …… 11%.

6. Profits rose ……… a low of 4.5 million to a high of 8 million in 2008.

7. Canada and Australia’s wheat exports fluctuated ……… 5 million and 6 million respectively.

8. There were significant improvements ……… healthcare ……… 1980.

9. The statistics show a reduction ……… 20% ……… energy costs as a result ……… the measures.

10.Profits fell ……… 10%, from 2,000 to 1,800 in 1970s.

11.The radio station experienced a fall ……… 36,000 listeners to a total audience ……… 2.1 million.

12.The number of students fell ……… a low of 1,500 in the second half of the year.

13.Cases of AIDS shot ……… from 2,400 in 1996 to 4,000 in 2004.

14.Demand reached a peak ……… 45,000 in early March.

15.The number of cars sold remained unchanged in 1999 ……… three million.

16.Students do between three ……… four hours homework a night.

17.The number of accidents ……… 1999 was slightly higher than that of 2000.

18.The figure rose steadily ……… the four years between 1997 ……… 2001.

19.Oil production rose dramatically at first but then leveled out ……… $70 a barrel.

20.There was an increase ……… 50,000 between 1990 and 1992.

21.……… 1994 ……… 1997, sales rose steadily ……… over 20,000.

22.DVD sales peaked ……… 60,000 ……… 1992 but then decreased ……… about 10,000 over the next two years.

23.In the year 2000, sales started ……… 10,000. In the first month, there was a rise ……… around 2,000.

24.After some fluctuations, sales in 2000 reached their peak ……… just over 15,000, a rise ……… 5,000 since the beginning of the year. Sales increased ……… over 10,000 between 1994 and 1997, but then dropped ……… more than 10,000 …………… 1997 and 1999.

25.In 2008, the rate of unemployment rose …… 10%.

26.In 2008, the rate of unemployment rose …… 10%, from 2,000 to 2,200 cases. 

27.There was a slight rise …… the number of men employed.

28.Experts expect there to be a fall …… approximately 30% over the next decade.

29.The introduction ……… DVDs led to a decline ……… 20% ……… video sales.

30.The figures show a drop ……… 5% ……… student numbers.

31.The health service program spent a total ……… $2.5 billion on staffing …… April 2002.

32.The survey hopes to track trends ……… consumer spending.

33.In 2009, the rate of unemployment fell ……… 2% (from 10% to 8%).

34.He won the election ……… 52% of the vote.

35.Unemployment reached its highest level ……… the year 2008 ……… 10%.

36.……… 2002, the cost of an average house in the UK was around £130,000. ……… 2007, the average house price had risen ……… almost £190,000, but it fell back ……… just under £150,000 ……… 2008.

37.Japan ……… two gold medals and a silver one stood ahead of the US ……… one gold and one bronze medal ……… 1968.