高级英语写作

叶忠星

目录

  • 1 第一单元 雅思写作导论
    • 1.1 Part 1 什么算是好的雅思作文
      • 1.1.1 部分雅思资源推荐
      • 1.1.2 2019年雅思大作文真题合集
      • 1.1.3 2018年雅思写作大作文真题
    • 1.2 Part 2 雅思写作评分标准
      • 1.2.1 lexical resource
        • 1.2.1.1 词汇多样性ppt
          • 1.2.1.1.1 选择更正式的词汇ppt
        • 1.2.1.2 词汇多样性范文分析
      • 1.2.2 Grammatical range and accuracy
      • 1.2.3 Coherence and Cohesion
      • 1.2.4 Task response
    • 1.3 Part 3 雅思作文语言关
    • 1.4 Part 4 雅思作文思维关
    • 1.5 Part 5 破解题目1  批判思维
    • 1.6 part 6 破解题目2   三大层次
      • 1.6.1 破题  论据思考
    • 1.7 part 7写前计划
    • 1.8 part 8雅思task 2常见话题
  • 2 第二单元 句子篇
    • 2.1 英语句子基本结构及拓展
      • 2.1.1 并列句练习题
      • 2.1.2 复合句练习
    • 2.2 句子错误
    • 2.3 常见句子语法错误类型
    • 2.4 句子语法错误修改实例
    • 2.5 改错作业集锦
    • 2.6 小贴士 如何写复杂句
    • 2.7 句式多样性
  • 3 第三单元 词汇篇
    • 3.1 概述
    • 3.2 task 2常见话题必备词汇
    • 3.3 雅思作文用词技巧
      • 3.3.1 小贴士 写作100组意群词汇
      • 3.3.2 小贴士 600多个高分词
    • 3.4 学术词汇练习题
    • 3.5 词汇替换练习132题
    • 3.6 简洁才是美
    • 3.7 配套词汇练习 不含答案
  • 4 第四单元 必备句型及段落
    • 4.1 新东方英文写作佳句300例
    • 4.2 文章开头 视频讲解
      • 4.2.1 如何写文章开头ppt
    • 4.3 如何写中间段落 视频
    • 4.4 原因-结果
    • 4.5 比较-对照
    • 4.6 批评-驳斥
    • 4.7 推理-分析
    • 4.8 举例-事实
    • 4.9 深入阐述
    • 4.10 反面阐述
    • 4.11 文章结尾视频讲解
      • 4.11.1 如何写结尾ppt
    • 4.12 最重用句型 总结
  • 5 第五单元 教育类
    • 5.1 教育类写作命题规律+ppt
    • 5.2 教育话题常用搭配
    • 5.3 词族练习
    • 5.4 翻译练习 ideas
    • 5.5 关联词练习
  • 6 第六单元 科技类
    • 6.1 科技类写作命题规律+ppt
      • 6.1.1 贴士brainstorming
      • 6.1.2 Connecting agreeing ideas and contrasting ideas
      • 6.1.3 Advantages and disadvantages
      • 6.1.4 大作文选词填空
      • 6.1.5 中间段落补全
    • 6.2 词族练习
    • 6.3 翻译练习ideas 1
    • 6.4 翻译练习ideas 2
    • 6.5 万能思路
    • 6.6 关联词练习
  • 7 第七单元 旅游类
    • 7.1 ideas for tourism ppt
      • 7.1.1 model essay living and working in a foreign country
      • 7.1.2 ordering
    • 7.2 词族练习
    • 7.3 翻译练习ideas
    • 7.4 大作文练习
    • 7.5 顾家北配套2.2.19廉价航空  句子改写任务
  • 8 第八单元 媒介类
    • 8.1 相应 ppt
    • 8.2 匹配题
    • 8.3 大作文练习
    • 8.4 大作文练习2
    • 8.5 媒体类翻译练习ideas
    • 8.6 万能思路
    • 8.7 顾家北配套2.2.14 广告  句子改写任务
  • 9 第九单元 政府类
    • 9.1 ppt
    • 9.2 政府观点
    • 9.3 政府类翻译练习ideas
    • 9.4 大作文对比
    • 9.5 顾家北配套2.2.9句子改写
  • 10 第十单元 家庭类
    • 10.1 家庭类 ppt
      • 10.1.1 小贴士 高分词替换低分词大作文
    • 10.2 小贴士  段落功能匹配
    • 10.3 大作文练习
    • 10.4 家庭类观点翻译ideas
    • 10.5 万能思路
    • 10.6 顾家北配套2.2.1句子改写
  • 11 第十一单元 社会/犯罪类
    • 11.1 章节ppt
    • 11.2 犯罪类补充阅读练习
    • 11.3 犯罪类观点翻译ideas
    • 11.4 万能思路
  • 12 第十二单元 动物类
    • 12.1 章节ppt
    • 12.2 动物类观点翻译ideas
  • 13 第十三单元 环境类
    • 13.1 章节ppt
    • 13.2 大作文练习
    • 13.3 词族练习
    • 13.4 词汇练习
    • 13.5 必备词汇
    • 13.6 环境类观点翻译ideas
    • 13.7 万能思路
  • 14 第十四单元 工作/生活类
    • 14.1 章节ppt
    • 14.2 话题 在家办公的好处和坏处
      • 14.2.1 Key language for writing about work and careers
      • 14.2.2 小贴士 代词连接观点和防止重复
    • 14.3 大作文练习2 Food and diet
    • 14.4 大作文1练习
    • 14.5 补充视频 大人可以从小孩那里学到什么?
  • 15 第十五单元 文化语言类
    • 15.1 章节ppt
    • 15.2 文化类ppt
    • 15.3 补充视频
    • 15.4 语言类练习
  • 16 第十六单元 图表题
    • 16.1 图表必备语言
    • 16.2 雅思小作文ppt
    • 16.3 小作文练习
    • 16.4 图表作文练习
    • 16.5 提示1 prepositions
    • 16.6 提示2 adding an explanation
    • 16.7 Describing numbers, percentages & fractions
    • 16.8 tip3
    • 16.9 练习2 图表
  • 17 第十七单元 地图题
    • 17.1 地图ppt
    • 17.2 地图练习1
    • 17.3 地图练习2
    • 17.4 地图练习3
  • 18 第十八单元 流程图
小贴士  段落功能匹配

A good example paragraph

I believe that family is one of the most important structures in society. It is within the family that children can learn how to get on with other people and how to behave, and these things are important for life the wider world. The family should also be a stable unit that provides love and support for children. Without this love and support, children might find it difficult to manage in the wider world. For example, children without loving, supportive parents could feel unable to do the things they would like to do, like going to university.

True or False

  1. A paragraph should have more than one main idea.    ............

  2. A paragraph should have more than one supporting idea.    ..............

  3. The first sentence of a paragraph should contain the main idea of the paragraph.  ... ..........

  4. The last sentence of a paragraph should contain the main idea of the paragraph.    ...........

  5. You should mainly use definite modal verbs, e.g. will / must.    ......

  6. You should mainly use less definite modal verbs, e.g. can/ might / could / should.    .....

     

    补全主题句

    1.......................................................................................................................................................

    Once, the traditional structure of two parents with two children was the most common family type in Western countries like the UK and the USA, but this is changing. New family structures include one-parent families and families with children from more than one marriage. These new family types are becoming increasingly common. Different family structures mean that many children live with a variety of full, step or half brothers and sisters.

    2.......................................................................................................................................................

    If more women go out to work, this cold affect the children in the family because they are not  receiving the attention they need. Many people claim that children are happy when both their parents are working, but someone needs to look after the children and the home, and women are often better at this role.

    3.......................................................................................................................................................

    Having brothers and sisters means that a child learns how to socialize with other children from a young age and this is incredibly beneficial for them. They also grow up and grow old with an existing support network around them. Which people with no brothers and sisters may not have. An only child can also be very lonely.

    4.......................................................................................................................................................

    It is not a child’s job to cook, clean or help in the home. Children should be playing and having fun because childhood is the only time when they will be free from work. Children should be developing rather than becoming tired doing housework. Although many argue that helping in the home teaches children to look after their environment and to be clean, children can learn these things in other ways than through housework.

     

    段落功能匹配

1. Introduction

2. Main body

3. Conclusion

‍a. Gives some general information about these essay topic, may put forward some differing opinions and gives an answer to the essay question.

b. Summarises all the arguments and restates your answer / opinion.

c. Describes and explains different viewpoints, arguments, advantages and disadvantages, supported by examples.‍

 

b. 段落排序题

In a family, both men and women should be employed outside the home and share childcare equally. To what extent do you  agree with this statement?

‍a. The economic benefits and the general benefits to children are the reasons why I believe that men should work outside the home and women should not. These traditional roles have worked successfully for a long time. Therefore, in my opinion, they do not need to change now.

b. Also, women should be the main careers for their children. Although some people argue that women should be able to work outside the home, this is hard when there are children. Women give birth to the children and they need to be with them when they are small. It is also better for the children to grow up with a parent who is always at home. Being looked after by a professional carer is not as good for children.

c. Nowadays, the traditional roles of men and woemn have changed. More men help in the home and more women go out to work. Some people say that this is a good thing, while others say that this is a negative thing. I believe that men should go out to work and women should stay at home. I believe that this is more economically efficient, and it is also better for children.

d. The traditional structure of men working and women staying at home means that the family has more economic benefits. A man working full-time is likely to earn more money thatn a man and woman both working part-time. Also, it means that the woman can do things at home to save money, like making clothes or growing food.