高级英语写作

叶忠星

目录

  • 1 第一单元 雅思写作导论
    • 1.1 Part 1 什么算是好的雅思作文
      • 1.1.1 部分雅思资源推荐
      • 1.1.2 2019年雅思大作文真题合集
      • 1.1.3 2018年雅思写作大作文真题
    • 1.2 Part 2 雅思写作评分标准
      • 1.2.1 lexical resource
        • 1.2.1.1 词汇多样性ppt
          • 1.2.1.1.1 选择更正式的词汇ppt
        • 1.2.1.2 词汇多样性范文分析
      • 1.2.2 Grammatical range and accuracy
      • 1.2.3 Coherence and Cohesion
      • 1.2.4 Task response
    • 1.3 Part 3 雅思作文语言关
    • 1.4 Part 4 雅思作文思维关
    • 1.5 Part 5 破解题目1  批判思维
    • 1.6 part 6 破解题目2   三大层次
      • 1.6.1 破题  论据思考
    • 1.7 part 7写前计划
    • 1.8 part 8雅思task 2常见话题
  • 2 第二单元 句子篇
    • 2.1 英语句子基本结构及拓展
      • 2.1.1 并列句练习题
      • 2.1.2 复合句练习
    • 2.2 句子错误
    • 2.3 常见句子语法错误类型
    • 2.4 句子语法错误修改实例
    • 2.5 改错作业集锦
    • 2.6 小贴士 如何写复杂句
    • 2.7 句式多样性
  • 3 第三单元 词汇篇
    • 3.1 概述
    • 3.2 task 2常见话题必备词汇
    • 3.3 雅思作文用词技巧
      • 3.3.1 小贴士 写作100组意群词汇
      • 3.3.2 小贴士 600多个高分词
    • 3.4 学术词汇练习题
    • 3.5 词汇替换练习132题
    • 3.6 简洁才是美
    • 3.7 配套词汇练习 不含答案
  • 4 第四单元 必备句型及段落
    • 4.1 新东方英文写作佳句300例
    • 4.2 文章开头 视频讲解
      • 4.2.1 如何写文章开头ppt
    • 4.3 如何写中间段落 视频
    • 4.4 原因-结果
    • 4.5 比较-对照
    • 4.6 批评-驳斥
    • 4.7 推理-分析
    • 4.8 举例-事实
    • 4.9 深入阐述
    • 4.10 反面阐述
    • 4.11 文章结尾视频讲解
      • 4.11.1 如何写结尾ppt
    • 4.12 最重用句型 总结
  • 5 第五单元 教育类
    • 5.1 教育类写作命题规律+ppt
    • 5.2 教育话题常用搭配
    • 5.3 词族练习
    • 5.4 翻译练习 ideas
    • 5.5 关联词练习
  • 6 第六单元 科技类
    • 6.1 科技类写作命题规律+ppt
      • 6.1.1 贴士brainstorming
      • 6.1.2 Connecting agreeing ideas and contrasting ideas
      • 6.1.3 Advantages and disadvantages
      • 6.1.4 大作文选词填空
      • 6.1.5 中间段落补全
    • 6.2 词族练习
    • 6.3 翻译练习ideas 1
    • 6.4 翻译练习ideas 2
    • 6.5 万能思路
    • 6.6 关联词练习
  • 7 第七单元 旅游类
    • 7.1 ideas for tourism ppt
      • 7.1.1 model essay living and working in a foreign country
      • 7.1.2 ordering
    • 7.2 词族练习
    • 7.3 翻译练习ideas
    • 7.4 大作文练习
    • 7.5 顾家北配套2.2.19廉价航空  句子改写任务
  • 8 第八单元 媒介类
    • 8.1 相应 ppt
    • 8.2 匹配题
    • 8.3 大作文练习
    • 8.4 大作文练习2
    • 8.5 媒体类翻译练习ideas
    • 8.6 万能思路
    • 8.7 顾家北配套2.2.14 广告  句子改写任务
  • 9 第九单元 政府类
    • 9.1 ppt
    • 9.2 政府观点
    • 9.3 政府类翻译练习ideas
    • 9.4 大作文对比
    • 9.5 顾家北配套2.2.9句子改写
  • 10 第十单元 家庭类
    • 10.1 家庭类 ppt
      • 10.1.1 小贴士 高分词替换低分词大作文
    • 10.2 小贴士  段落功能匹配
    • 10.3 大作文练习
    • 10.4 家庭类观点翻译ideas
    • 10.5 万能思路
    • 10.6 顾家北配套2.2.1句子改写
  • 11 第十一单元 社会/犯罪类
    • 11.1 章节ppt
    • 11.2 犯罪类补充阅读练习
    • 11.3 犯罪类观点翻译ideas
    • 11.4 万能思路
  • 12 第十二单元 动物类
    • 12.1 章节ppt
    • 12.2 动物类观点翻译ideas
  • 13 第十三单元 环境类
    • 13.1 章节ppt
    • 13.2 大作文练习
    • 13.3 词族练习
    • 13.4 词汇练习
    • 13.5 必备词汇
    • 13.6 环境类观点翻译ideas
    • 13.7 万能思路
  • 14 第十四单元 工作/生活类
    • 14.1 章节ppt
    • 14.2 话题 在家办公的好处和坏处
      • 14.2.1 Key language for writing about work and careers
      • 14.2.2 小贴士 代词连接观点和防止重复
    • 14.3 大作文练习2 Food and diet
    • 14.4 大作文1练习
    • 14.5 补充视频 大人可以从小孩那里学到什么?
  • 15 第十五单元 文化语言类
    • 15.1 章节ppt
    • 15.2 文化类ppt
    • 15.3 补充视频
    • 15.4 语言类练习
  • 16 第十六单元 图表题
    • 16.1 图表必备语言
    • 16.2 雅思小作文ppt
    • 16.3 小作文练习
    • 16.4 图表作文练习
    • 16.5 提示1 prepositions
    • 16.6 提示2 adding an explanation
    • 16.7 Describing numbers, percentages & fractions
    • 16.8 tip3
    • 16.9 练习2 图表
  • 17 第十七单元 地图题
    • 17.1 地图ppt
    • 17.2 地图练习1
    • 17.3 地图练习2
    • 17.4 地图练习3
  • 18 第十八单元 流程图
句式多样性
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  • 2 ppt
  • 3 辅助ppt

雅思写作复杂句怎么回事!

 

事实上,剑桥考官的范文中,复杂句的数量寥寥可数,很多时候都是把简单句进行了华丽的包装,今天就来看看考官喜欢的高分句型是什么样的,和你想象的是不是有差距!

1状语前置

所谓状语前置就是把状语(副词,介词短语,分词,不定式)放到句首。考官会频繁使用这种语法结构,而很多考生却没有意识,这种句式通过一堆长句子中出现一个小短语,可以让句子产生长短结合的紧凑感,实例如下:

1Unfortunately, professionals from other fields who make a much greater contributions to human society, are paid so much less that it is hard to disagree with the statement.

2Obviously, education systems are based on the belief that all children can effectively be taught to acquire different skills.

3Like self-awareness,this is also very difficult to achieve, but I think these are the two factors that may be most important for achieving happiness.

4As a result of media attention, sports professionals in my country have become stars and celebrities.

5With the political will, such measures could really reduce the amount of rubbish we produce.

6Struggling in poverty, people in these countries believe international aid is essential and should be continued.

7To do this, we need to improve the choice of public transport services available to individuals.

8To become successful,more skills and dedication are required.

2句中插入短语

和状语前置类似,长句子中间插入一个小短语,可以让句子读起来更轻松灵活。考官实例如下:

1This will affect the job market, which, after all, is a key target in any economic plan.

2Sports stars and pop stars,for example, are soon replaced by the neat younger, more energetic generation.

3So overall, I believe that, attending schools from a young age is good for most children.

4Universities, when it is functioning well, should offer both theoretical knowledge as well as professional training.

3倒装句

这种语法现象考生都学过,但往往在作文中忘记或没有意识使用。先看两个例子:

1Parents should spend time on their children. They should also communicate with them.

2) We can never lose sight of the significance of education.

这两个句子没有任何错误,但都很单调平淡,如果使用倒装,效果就不一样了。

第一句可以用not only /but also 句型来改写成倒装句:Not only should parents spent time on their children, but they are also advised to interact with them.

第二句可以否定词提前,强调突出不可忽视On no account/by no means/ in no way/never can we lose sight of the significance of education.

考官范文中的倒装例子并不多,主要体现在以下几种情况中:

1Only in this way can this problem be effectively solved.

2We can see that not only are there very large differences between these economies, but that these gaps are widening.

3Strange as it may seem, parents’ attention sometimes hinders students’academic development.

4Equally important to success in learning a foreign language is constant attention to details.

考生在平时的语言积累和写作练习中,可以多模仿这几种固定句式,在文章中穿插1-2句倒装句。

4强调句

强调句的句式框架结构为It is+(被强调的成分) that/who+(句子剩余成分), 类似于中文的正是导致了…”的意思。例如,考官范文中的例句:

1It is the interaction of the two that shapes a person’ personality and dictates how that personality develops.

2It is only those who reach the very top of their profession who can get these huge salaries.

强调句式是考生比较难把握的一种句型,容易和it引导的形式主语相混淆,其实我们可以通过去掉It is… that…/It is…who…的框架看剩下的是否是一个完整的句子来判断强调句写的是否正确。

考生可以以通过以上几种句式结构的介绍,搭配简单句去使用,让句式灵活多变,例如:

二十世纪末科技的繁荣,人们开始广泛使用电脑

这句话可以分别用以上介绍的句式结构来变化表达法,使句子做到丰富多变,不再单一重复:

1witness 句型

The late 20th century witnessed the prosperity in science and technology, thus giving rise to the wide application of computers.

2) With 结构状语前置

With the prosperity in science and technology in the late 20th century, computers were widely applied.

3) 倒装句

So flourishing was the science and technology in the late 20th century that computers were widely applied in various fronts.

4) 强调句

It was the prosperity in science and technology in the late 20th century that gave rise to the wide application of computers.

5平行结构

严格来讲,平行结构并不属于特殊句式,而是英语语法的规范要求,但是由于遵守这个基本语法规则的中国考生太少了,平行结构也升级成了一种特殊句式。这种结构的使用在考官范文里出现较多,最常见的形式是在表示并列关系的连接词,例如 and/or等的前后两侧用名词对名词,形容词对形容词,动词不定式对动词不定式,分词短语对分词短语,从句对从句比如:

1Satisfaction is also increased by a sense of responsibility for and loyal to a team.

2Even when children use a computer for other purposes, such as getting information or emailing friends, it is no substitute for human interaction.

3Some essays are hard to understand not because they are long but because they are obscure.

4They will certainly be the first to help children learn what is important in life, how they are expected to behave and what role they will play in their world.

剑桥考官在范文中对于平行原则都是严格遵守,考生在这个写作细节句式上希望也可以向官方范文看齐。