高级英语写作

叶忠星

目录

  • 1 第一单元 雅思写作导论
    • 1.1 Part 1 什么算是好的雅思作文
      • 1.1.1 部分雅思资源推荐
      • 1.1.2 2019年雅思大作文真题合集
      • 1.1.3 2018年雅思写作大作文真题
    • 1.2 Part 2 雅思写作评分标准
      • 1.2.1 lexical resource
        • 1.2.1.1 词汇多样性ppt
          • 1.2.1.1.1 选择更正式的词汇ppt
        • 1.2.1.2 词汇多样性范文分析
      • 1.2.2 Grammatical range and accuracy
      • 1.2.3 Coherence and Cohesion
      • 1.2.4 Task response
    • 1.3 Part 3 雅思作文语言关
    • 1.4 Part 4 雅思作文思维关
    • 1.5 Part 5 破解题目1  批判思维
    • 1.6 part 6 破解题目2   三大层次
      • 1.6.1 破题  论据思考
    • 1.7 part 7写前计划
    • 1.8 part 8雅思task 2常见话题
  • 2 第二单元 句子篇
    • 2.1 英语句子基本结构及拓展
      • 2.1.1 并列句练习题
      • 2.1.2 复合句练习
    • 2.2 句子错误
    • 2.3 常见句子语法错误类型
    • 2.4 句子语法错误修改实例
    • 2.5 改错作业集锦
    • 2.6 小贴士 如何写复杂句
    • 2.7 句式多样性
  • 3 第三单元 词汇篇
    • 3.1 概述
    • 3.2 task 2常见话题必备词汇
    • 3.3 雅思作文用词技巧
      • 3.3.1 小贴士 写作100组意群词汇
      • 3.3.2 小贴士 600多个高分词
    • 3.4 学术词汇练习题
    • 3.5 词汇替换练习132题
    • 3.6 简洁才是美
    • 3.7 配套词汇练习 不含答案
  • 4 第四单元 必备句型及段落
    • 4.1 新东方英文写作佳句300例
    • 4.2 文章开头 视频讲解
      • 4.2.1 如何写文章开头ppt
    • 4.3 如何写中间段落 视频
    • 4.4 原因-结果
    • 4.5 比较-对照
    • 4.6 批评-驳斥
    • 4.7 推理-分析
    • 4.8 举例-事实
    • 4.9 深入阐述
    • 4.10 反面阐述
    • 4.11 文章结尾视频讲解
      • 4.11.1 如何写结尾ppt
    • 4.12 最重用句型 总结
  • 5 第五单元 教育类
    • 5.1 教育类写作命题规律+ppt
    • 5.2 教育话题常用搭配
    • 5.3 词族练习
    • 5.4 翻译练习 ideas
    • 5.5 关联词练习
  • 6 第六单元 科技类
    • 6.1 科技类写作命题规律+ppt
      • 6.1.1 贴士brainstorming
      • 6.1.2 Connecting agreeing ideas and contrasting ideas
      • 6.1.3 Advantages and disadvantages
      • 6.1.4 大作文选词填空
      • 6.1.5 中间段落补全
    • 6.2 词族练习
    • 6.3 翻译练习ideas 1
    • 6.4 翻译练习ideas 2
    • 6.5 万能思路
    • 6.6 关联词练习
  • 7 第七单元 旅游类
    • 7.1 ideas for tourism ppt
      • 7.1.1 model essay living and working in a foreign country
      • 7.1.2 ordering
    • 7.2 词族练习
    • 7.3 翻译练习ideas
    • 7.4 大作文练习
    • 7.5 顾家北配套2.2.19廉价航空  句子改写任务
  • 8 第八单元 媒介类
    • 8.1 相应 ppt
    • 8.2 匹配题
    • 8.3 大作文练习
    • 8.4 大作文练习2
    • 8.5 媒体类翻译练习ideas
    • 8.6 万能思路
    • 8.7 顾家北配套2.2.14 广告  句子改写任务
  • 9 第九单元 政府类
    • 9.1 ppt
    • 9.2 政府观点
    • 9.3 政府类翻译练习ideas
    • 9.4 大作文对比
    • 9.5 顾家北配套2.2.9句子改写
  • 10 第十单元 家庭类
    • 10.1 家庭类 ppt
      • 10.1.1 小贴士 高分词替换低分词大作文
    • 10.2 小贴士  段落功能匹配
    • 10.3 大作文练习
    • 10.4 家庭类观点翻译ideas
    • 10.5 万能思路
    • 10.6 顾家北配套2.2.1句子改写
  • 11 第十一单元 社会/犯罪类
    • 11.1 章节ppt
    • 11.2 犯罪类补充阅读练习
    • 11.3 犯罪类观点翻译ideas
    • 11.4 万能思路
  • 12 第十二单元 动物类
    • 12.1 章节ppt
    • 12.2 动物类观点翻译ideas
  • 13 第十三单元 环境类
    • 13.1 章节ppt
    • 13.2 大作文练习
    • 13.3 词族练习
    • 13.4 词汇练习
    • 13.5 必备词汇
    • 13.6 环境类观点翻译ideas
    • 13.7 万能思路
  • 14 第十四单元 工作/生活类
    • 14.1 章节ppt
    • 14.2 话题 在家办公的好处和坏处
      • 14.2.1 Key language for writing about work and careers
      • 14.2.2 小贴士 代词连接观点和防止重复
    • 14.3 大作文练习2 Food and diet
    • 14.4 大作文1练习
    • 14.5 补充视频 大人可以从小孩那里学到什么?
  • 15 第十五单元 文化语言类
    • 15.1 章节ppt
    • 15.2 文化类ppt
    • 15.3 补充视频
    • 15.4 语言类练习
  • 16 第十六单元 图表题
    • 16.1 图表必备语言
    • 16.2 雅思小作文ppt
    • 16.3 小作文练习
    • 16.4 图表作文练习
    • 16.5 提示1 prepositions
    • 16.6 提示2 adding an explanation
    • 16.7 Describing numbers, percentages & fractions
    • 16.8 tip3
    • 16.9 练习2 图表
  • 17 第十七单元 地图题
    • 17.1 地图ppt
    • 17.2 地图练习1
    • 17.3 地图练习2
    • 17.4 地图练习3
  • 18 第十八单元 流程图
话题 在家办公的好处和坏处

You should spend about 40 minutes on this task. Write about the following topic:

Discuss the advantages and disadvantages of working from home.

Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Write at least 250 words.

 

1 Before you read the model essay below, discuss if you think these chunks are connected with the advantages or disadvantages of working from home.

1 greater freedom    2 attend meetings    3 extremely tempting

4 rush-hour traffic     5 feel cut-off     6 make a personal phone call

2 Read the essay to check if your answers to Exercise 1 were the same as the

writer's opinion.

 

Over the last two or three decades, the way that business is done has changed dramatically due to major advances in technology. As a result, a growing number of people are now choosing to work from the comfort of their own home. However is this development positive, or are there more drawbacks than advantages? In this essay, I will explore the pros and cons of working from home and try to draw some conclusions.

 

I will start by looking at the advantages. One of the major plus points of working remotely is the fact that you do not have to commute to work. Millions of people worldwide have to deal with rush-hour traffic to make their way to the office. Obviously, this is not necessary if you turn your home into your place of work.

 

Secondly, working at home gives you much more freedom to manage your working day. For example, if you work in an office, you are often asked to attend meetings, and your timetable is decided for you. This is not the case when you work in an office at home.

 

On the other hand, it can be very easy to get distracted if you are in your home environment. For instance, it is extremely tempting to turn on the television, go and relax in the garden or make a personal phone call. Clearly, these distractions will dramatically reduce how much work you produce. Another major disadvantage of  working from home is that people have much less contact with their colleagues. This can make them feel cut-off, despite the extra freedom they have working from home. What's more, daily contact with people at work is often how good friendships are made.

 

To conclude, there are both positives and negatives to this way of working. In spite of the fact that it removes travel issues and gives us greater freedom, many people find it difficult because of distractions at home and feeling isolated. Personally, I believe it is important to keep work and home life separate to find the right work-life balance.   (345 words)


Structure and linking

in spite of / despite

A useful way to link ideas in your writing is by using in spite of and despite. After in spite of or despite, we use:

a a noun (e.g. the weather)

b a pronoun (e.g. this/that/ these/his)

c (not) verb + —ing (e.g. having, being)

 

1 Match these examples (1-3) to the rules in the box above (a-c).

1 Working from home is becoming increasingly popular, despite having several

major disadvantages.

2 In spite of these problems, many people still choose to work at home.

3 Despite the distractions, many people still choose to work at home.

2 Underline the grammar pattern in each of the three examples in Exercise 1.

3 Rewrite the ideas in these sentences using despite or in spite of as indicated in brackets.

1 Millions of people work in the comfort of their own home. However, they are not very productive. (despite)

Despite not being very productive, millions of people work in the comfort of their own home.

2 Although rush-hour traffic around London is awful, hundreds of thousands of workers commute on a daily basis, (in spite of)

3 There are many clear advantages to using email for business communication.

However, it often leads to breakdowns in communication, (despite)

4 Although using email can cause breakdowns in communication, it is still used widely in business, (in spite of)

4 Focus on the use of although and however in Exercise 3. How is it different from the use of despite / in spite of?

5 Rewrite the sentences in Exercise 1 using although and however.

6 Connect these ideas with despite or in spite of.

1 still buy a newspaper / advances in wireless Internet connection

2 is good for your health / people never ride a bicycle to work

3 millions of students study abroad / language barrier

4 extremely difficult at times / excitement / starting own business

5 advantages of owning a pet / cause problems

You can also use despite the fact that / in spite of the fact that + subject + verb (clause). Despite the fa ct that working from home has several disadvantages, it is becoming increasingly popular.

In spite of the fact that technology is improving, working away from the office still has its problems.

 

7 Highlight the subject + verb in the examples in the box above.

8 Choose three sentences from earlier exercises in this section and rewrite them using despite the fact that or in spite o f the fact that.

9 Scan the model essay in this and other units of the book to find examples of despite / in spite of.