高级英语写作

叶忠星

目录

  • 1 第一单元 雅思写作导论
    • 1.1 Part 1 什么算是好的雅思作文
      • 1.1.1 部分雅思资源推荐
      • 1.1.2 2019年雅思大作文真题合集
      • 1.1.3 2018年雅思写作大作文真题
    • 1.2 Part 2 雅思写作评分标准
      • 1.2.1 lexical resource
        • 1.2.1.1 词汇多样性ppt
          • 1.2.1.1.1 选择更正式的词汇ppt
        • 1.2.1.2 词汇多样性范文分析
      • 1.2.2 Grammatical range and accuracy
      • 1.2.3 Coherence and Cohesion
      • 1.2.4 Task response
    • 1.3 Part 3 雅思作文语言关
    • 1.4 Part 4 雅思作文思维关
    • 1.5 Part 5 破解题目1  批判思维
    • 1.6 part 6 破解题目2   三大层次
      • 1.6.1 破题  论据思考
    • 1.7 part 7写前计划
    • 1.8 part 8雅思task 2常见话题
  • 2 第二单元 句子篇
    • 2.1 英语句子基本结构及拓展
      • 2.1.1 并列句练习题
      • 2.1.2 复合句练习
    • 2.2 句子错误
    • 2.3 常见句子语法错误类型
    • 2.4 句子语法错误修改实例
    • 2.5 改错作业集锦
    • 2.6 小贴士 如何写复杂句
    • 2.7 句式多样性
  • 3 第三单元 词汇篇
    • 3.1 概述
    • 3.2 task 2常见话题必备词汇
    • 3.3 雅思作文用词技巧
      • 3.3.1 小贴士 写作100组意群词汇
      • 3.3.2 小贴士 600多个高分词
    • 3.4 学术词汇练习题
    • 3.5 词汇替换练习132题
    • 3.6 简洁才是美
    • 3.7 配套词汇练习 不含答案
  • 4 第四单元 必备句型及段落
    • 4.1 新东方英文写作佳句300例
    • 4.2 文章开头 视频讲解
      • 4.2.1 如何写文章开头ppt
    • 4.3 如何写中间段落 视频
    • 4.4 原因-结果
    • 4.5 比较-对照
    • 4.6 批评-驳斥
    • 4.7 推理-分析
    • 4.8 举例-事实
    • 4.9 深入阐述
    • 4.10 反面阐述
    • 4.11 文章结尾视频讲解
      • 4.11.1 如何写结尾ppt
    • 4.12 最重用句型 总结
  • 5 第五单元 教育类
    • 5.1 教育类写作命题规律+ppt
    • 5.2 教育话题常用搭配
    • 5.3 词族练习
    • 5.4 翻译练习 ideas
    • 5.5 关联词练习
  • 6 第六单元 科技类
    • 6.1 科技类写作命题规律+ppt
      • 6.1.1 贴士brainstorming
      • 6.1.2 Connecting agreeing ideas and contrasting ideas
      • 6.1.3 Advantages and disadvantages
      • 6.1.4 大作文选词填空
      • 6.1.5 中间段落补全
    • 6.2 词族练习
    • 6.3 翻译练习ideas 1
    • 6.4 翻译练习ideas 2
    • 6.5 万能思路
    • 6.6 关联词练习
  • 7 第七单元 旅游类
    • 7.1 ideas for tourism ppt
      • 7.1.1 model essay living and working in a foreign country
      • 7.1.2 ordering
    • 7.2 词族练习
    • 7.3 翻译练习ideas
    • 7.4 大作文练习
    • 7.5 顾家北配套2.2.19廉价航空  句子改写任务
  • 8 第八单元 媒介类
    • 8.1 相应 ppt
    • 8.2 匹配题
    • 8.3 大作文练习
    • 8.4 大作文练习2
    • 8.5 媒体类翻译练习ideas
    • 8.6 万能思路
    • 8.7 顾家北配套2.2.14 广告  句子改写任务
  • 9 第九单元 政府类
    • 9.1 ppt
    • 9.2 政府观点
    • 9.3 政府类翻译练习ideas
    • 9.4 大作文对比
    • 9.5 顾家北配套2.2.9句子改写
  • 10 第十单元 家庭类
    • 10.1 家庭类 ppt
      • 10.1.1 小贴士 高分词替换低分词大作文
    • 10.2 小贴士  段落功能匹配
    • 10.3 大作文练习
    • 10.4 家庭类观点翻译ideas
    • 10.5 万能思路
    • 10.6 顾家北配套2.2.1句子改写
  • 11 第十一单元 社会/犯罪类
    • 11.1 章节ppt
    • 11.2 犯罪类补充阅读练习
    • 11.3 犯罪类观点翻译ideas
    • 11.4 万能思路
  • 12 第十二单元 动物类
    • 12.1 章节ppt
    • 12.2 动物类观点翻译ideas
  • 13 第十三单元 环境类
    • 13.1 章节ppt
    • 13.2 大作文练习
    • 13.3 词族练习
    • 13.4 词汇练习
    • 13.5 必备词汇
    • 13.6 环境类观点翻译ideas
    • 13.7 万能思路
  • 14 第十四单元 工作/生活类
    • 14.1 章节ppt
    • 14.2 话题 在家办公的好处和坏处
      • 14.2.1 Key language for writing about work and careers
      • 14.2.2 小贴士 代词连接观点和防止重复
    • 14.3 大作文练习2 Food and diet
    • 14.4 大作文1练习
    • 14.5 补充视频 大人可以从小孩那里学到什么?
  • 15 第十五单元 文化语言类
    • 15.1 章节ppt
    • 15.2 文化类ppt
    • 15.3 补充视频
    • 15.4 语言类练习
  • 16 第十六单元 图表题
    • 16.1 图表必备语言
    • 16.2 雅思小作文ppt
    • 16.3 小作文练习
    • 16.4 图表作文练习
    • 16.5 提示1 prepositions
    • 16.6 提示2 adding an explanation
    • 16.7 Describing numbers, percentages & fractions
    • 16.8 tip3
    • 16.9 练习2 图表
  • 17 第十七单元 地图题
    • 17.1 地图ppt
    • 17.2 地图练习1
    • 17.3 地图练习2
    • 17.4 地图练习3
  • 18 第十八单元 流程图
大作文练习

Exercise 1

Read this essay and complete the gaps with one of the words or phrases from the box below.

acid rain                   battery farming         biodegradable packaging

biodiversity                climatic change   conservation    conserve        conservation program 

contaminated        deforestation               desertification

eco-friendly      ecological     ecology     ecosystem     emissions 

endangered species               environmentalists             environmentally friendly

erosion     extinct             fossil fuels     fumes 

genetically modified    green belt

global warming        greenhouse effect                 greenhouse gases                  

    intensive farming        natural behaviour           natural resources 

organic    organic farming          poaching        pollute          (air) pollution           rare breeds

rainforest          recycle               recycling               renewable / sustainable energy 

research       solar power                   unleaded gas                       wildlife management


Environmental degradation is a major world problem. What causes this problem, and what can we do to prevent it?

There is no doubt that the environment is in trouble. Factories burn (1) ........................ which produce (2) ........................, and this kills trees. At the same time, (3) ........................ rise into the air and contribute to (4) ........................ which threatens to melt the polar ice cap. Meanwhile farmers clear huge areas of (5) ........................ in places such as the Amazon to produce feeding land for cattle or wood for building. Rivers and oceans are so heavily (6) ........................ by industrial waste that it is no longer safe to go swimming. Cars pump out poisonous (7) ........................ which we all have to breathe in. (8) ........................ and overfishing are killing off millions of animals, including whales, elephants, and other (9) ........................ In fact, all around us, all living things large and small which comprise our finely balanced (10) ........................ are being systematically destroyed by human greed and thoughtlessness.

There is a lot we can all do, however, to help prevent this. The easiest thing, of course, is to (11)........................ waste material such as paper and glass so that we can use it again. We should also check that the things we buy from supermarkets are packaged in (12) ........................ packaging which decomposes easily. At the same time, we should make a conscious effort to avoid foods which are (13) ........................ (at least until someone proves that they are safe both for us and for the environment). If you are truly committed to protecting the environment, of course, you should only buy (14) ........................ fruit and vegetables, safe in the knowledge that they have been naturally cultivated. Finally, of course, we should buy a smaller car that uses (15) ........................ Even better, we should try to make more use of public transportation. 


Serious (16) ........................, however, do much more. They are aware of the global issues involved and will actively involve themselves in (17) ........................ by making sure our forests are kept safe for future generations. They will oppose activities which are harmful to animals, such as (18) ........................ and they will campaign to keep the (19) ........................ around our towns and cities free from new building. We cannot all be as committed as them, but we can at least do our own little bit at a grass roots level. We humans control our planet, but that doesn't mean we can do whatever we like with it.